Family Portrait, Part IV - Meeting the Parents (Various Pairings)

[esther_91]

Title: Meeting the parents (Family Portrait, Part IV)
Rating: G
Pairing(s): Gary Neville/Ryan Giggs; Nemanja Vidic/Rio Ferdinand
Disclaimer: Don’t own anything, no money made. And still lovin’ it…
Author’s Notes: This is for hiro_chan , who turned…older this week. I know I’m late as always, but happy belated birthday to you, big sister - I love (and miss)

Comments

[dragged_up]

Oh these are FANTASTIC. Especially poor Rio talking to Gary. (And ahahaha oh god, the "show you naughty" bit!) I looooved it. :D

[esther_91]

*blinks* ...how fast do you read? :P

Aww, I'm so glad you like it - it's been such a long time! (talking about 'long time' - are you and bottle_of_smoke working on anything atm? ^^)

than you for the lovely feedback! (: ♥

[dragged_up]

*cough* Not THAT fast... (I got back from my shower just as you posted this, I think.)

Not at the moment no, she's been really busy so she hasn't been online much. There's a story or two we had planned that I'd still like to work on but I don't think anything will be happening there for a while, unfortunately. I've also got some unfinished stuff floating around on my harddrive but I can't figure out how to finish any of it. :\

And no problem! You gave me a smile when I needed one :D

[esther_91]

Aw, that's a shame - you know I love your fics! :D

...somewhere on my harddrive, there's this folder called 'writings' - it's full of unfinished stuff and it's horrible x( If you needed ideas, you can talk to me via msn if you want? It might or might not help, but it could be fun! No problem if you don't want others to poke around in your fics though ;P

[shandoras]

I want to have this kid Owen around, he's the cutest thing ever. I still love all the domesticity of this and how you capture the children's world. And Rio and Nemanja are so adorable here :D

[esther_91]

*makes mental note to ship kid Owen to you* :P

Thank you! :D

[hiro_chan]

“I’ll beat him up if he hurts Nem,” Wayne told Ronnie later with all the seriousness of a responsible sibling, watching the interrogation from a corner of the room, where he and his brother were engaged in a half-hearted game of Guess The Theme Tune while they were waiting for Ryan to call them to dinner.

Ronnie nodded emphatically in response. “We could show him naughty,” he added eagerly and smiled widely at his brother, apparently very satisfied with his brilliant idea. Please can I have them as my little brothers XDXD

[esther_91]

> Please can I have them as my little brothers XDXD???

Already packed into boxes and ready to be shipped to the UK. ^^

I'm so glad you enjoyed reading this (even though it was a little late..I was just being true to fashion! XD) - how come, by the way, your comment is always the longest? :P

>Please do keep writing -

Do I have a choice if I get lovely feedback like that? XD *luuuurves you* ♥♥

[alejaboo]

mmm *makes herself cosy with a blanket and warm cocoa infront of the fireplace*
it's a lovely fic
*hugs*

[esther_91]

aw. ta :)

[kobean]

ESTHER!11!! ♥ AND ESTHER-FIC! EXCUSE ME WHILE I "OMG" EVERYWHERE.

nggggh, i have clearly forgotten just how adorable this family you created was because i was just cracking up and smiling throughout the entire thing. and again, i sound like a broken record or something, but your characterisations of each of the kids, and rio and nemanja and ryan and gary, are so so so wonderful. it just makes it real, and even more of a joy to read, especially since you have them down to perfection - their personality, and their mannerism, and at the same time that you keep them original to your perception of them in the story - the people we get to watch on the field match it perfectly. (whoa, that was a really long and confusing sentence, hope it made sense. XD)

not to mention the fact that your writing never ceases to leave a smile on my face, and oh how i've really, really missed it. and how i love it so.

GAAAAAAH. i love, love, love.

<333333

[esther_91]

aww, it made perfect sense to me - thanks so much, love! *hugs* :) ♥