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[estuve]

title: a wild thing.
characters: fernando torres/sergio ramos. a bit of steven gerrard/xabi alonso, iker casillas/cesc fabregas. david villa. pepe reina.
rating: r.
disclaimer: i'm lying.
word count: 10088.
notes: torero au. firstly, I HAVEN'T FORGOTTEN ABOUT MY OTHER FIC, but i really am struggling with the part 2, so bare with me. hahahaha.

Comments

[sillypiglets2]

This is delightful.

[estuve]

so are you.

[tsuki_no_kani]

Wow. I didn't realize how long this was when I started reading, but once I started I couldn't stop. This story is seriously beautiful.

Its really hard to find anything on bullfighting that isn't biased and superficial, it was nice to see both the good, the bad and the human side of it all.

I loved every single bit, but I have to say I was really impressed by the scene with Sergio and his mom. It made me feel for him, and to me it emphasizes what a good job you've done giving this story heart and depth.

I don't know if I'm making any sense, but yeah, this story is amazing and beautiful and I can't wait to read it again.

[estuve]

um, wow. thank you so much for this lovely, lovely comment. you're making me blush.

[kissmecait17]

Perfect. I'm always so excited when you post. Love this.

[estuve]

hehehe thank you for always commenting!

[mumblo]

It was interesting having Sergio be the aloof one for a change, which totally works with the presumed bravado of a matador. I really liked this, which is saying a lot for me because I usually don't read S/F!

The S/X subplot was great and not just because they're my favorites! You kept them as a subplot but gave us enough information to make their budding relationship believable! Their final scene -- without dialogue -- was wonderful. I could practically hear Xabi reacting with a "What took you so long?" XD

Xabi's "I still don’t know what you mean when you do that," had me cracking up! Favorite line, hands down.

[estuve]

yeah i was tired of how i always write them, so i tried going for something different. hahahahahahaha. I'M REALLY GLAD YOU LIKED IT AND GAVE IT A CHANCE.

really?? omg i hated what i had done with them and i felt like it was so...unnecessary but i hate not having them in fics...HAHAHAHAHHAHA. but ahhh, thank you. =)

HAHAHAH that was a fun line to write.

i love this comment. lol thank you.

[agarina_bloom]

Wow I loved this,there should be more bullfighting fics! unf,Sergio would be a perfect torero.

[estuve]

hehehe thank you!