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Jul 08, 2011 19:10

title: a wild thing.
characters: fernando torres/sergio ramos. a bit of steven gerrard/xabi alonso, iker casillas/cesc fabregas. david villa. pepe reina.
rating: r.
disclaimer: i'm lying.
word count: 10088.
notes: torero au. firstly, I HAVEN'T FORGOTTEN ABOUT MY OTHER FIC, but i really am struggling with the part 2, so bare with me. hahahaha. ( Read more... )

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lady_quark July 29 2011, 17:52:17 UTC
no seriously, if that's not among the most awesome things I have ever EVER read than I don't know.

I can't even settle for something specific I love about this, it's just utterly perfect in whole.

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estuve August 5 2011, 19:46:39 UTC
wow, REALLY?? ahh thank you so much for commenting alksdjfsla.

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snuzzie July 29 2011, 21:56:57 UTC
He does a weird thing with his eyes, something he’s grown accustomed to do lately, and somehow expects Xabi to understand. Xabi says, “I still don’t know what you mean when you do that,” and Sergio’s eye expressions turn into a glare, which Xabi can read very well.

HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHaoisdjoiasjd omg I loveeeee them. XABI AND SERGIO AS BFFS IS LIKE. MY FAVORITE THING IN THE WHOLE WORLD.

“Who likes me a lot?” Sergio finishes. His smirk only seems to be widening. Xabi, personally, has no idea how.

omfg lmfao I LOVE HAHAHAHAHAHHAHA

“Leave him alone,” Sergio says. “He has a crush.”

Hahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahah lmfao eff Xabi's life.

“But - ” Sergio wants to say, I have Fernando. But I have Fernando.

dsfokpsdokfpodskfposkf my heart

Fernando gets up, wraps a blanket around his waist and walks over to him. He kisses the back of his neck, and Sergio lets out the breath he was holding in. He leans back against him a bit, and Fernando presses another kiss to his neck.

SDPOFKPODS KFPOSD KFPOSDKFPOSDKFPOSKFD I DIE

Iker opens his beer ( ... )

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estuve August 5 2011, 19:47:13 UTC
ummmm your comment made me openly weep....................lol

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estuve August 5 2011, 19:47:41 UTC
HAHAHAHAHAHAH no but it's really my fav

i forgot what it feels like to have friends reading my fics bc their comments are always da best.....HAHAHAHAHAHHA

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jumping_down July 30 2011, 08:20:36 UTC
I love that this story gives the reader so much to work with: so many characters with distinct personalities and stories, like I feel attached even to Cayetano and Jose. And I love that it's funny and hot and romantic and angsty and all kinds of sad when they talk about how bullfighting has affected their lives. I don't know a thing about bullfighting, but now I feel like I'm in their world. Great story. ♥

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estuve August 5 2011, 19:48:23 UTC
i am irrationally in love with this comment. hahahasklafdhh thank you so much for it♥

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narusaku4vr August 4 2011, 11:42:31 UTC
I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS!!!

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estuve August 5 2011, 19:48:33 UTC
I LOVE YOU!!!

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mycertainty August 5 2011, 07:41:15 UTC
“Likewise,” Sergio purrs. Fucking purrs.

“Who likes me a lot?” Sergio finishes. His smirk only seems to be widening.

Sergio smiles in approval. His eyes travel down his torso. He licks his lips. Everyone notices, and Fernando can only grin. Villa interrupts, “I’m Villa, by the way. If you were wondering, you know,” and Xabi chuckles, because Sergio really doesn’t care.

Sergio you little slutttttttttt.

He glares when they all burst out in laughter, pulls out his phone and starts texting random people about his anger.

Such a child haha.

“Some guy,” Sergio shrugs, face hardening.

RUDE He grins at him, and Villa, who’s on his other side, can only roll his eyes. “Get a room,” he mutters. Fernando laughs, brushes his fingers against Sergio’s.

CUTIE PIES.

Villa says, “Mine does too,” a pause. “Does this mean you’ll fuck me with your eyes now too?”

UGLY LAUGHING hahahaha omygod

“Because I like you,” Stevie smirks, and Xabi’s not sure if he means I like you or I like you or -

STOP IT STEVIE. You're ruining my life.

Fernando shrugs ( ... )

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mycertainty August 5 2011, 07:42:48 UTC
but hehe yes. anyway. this was SO good. and i took spanish 2 in senior year of high school which is now about 2 years ago so i cannot remember anymore of these bullfighting terms ahahaha

BUT YES SO GOOD. you're still flawless hehe.

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estuve August 5 2011, 19:49:49 UTC
hahahahahahahhahahahahahahhaahha well i hope it made sense...ish....

thank u lol omg

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estuve August 5 2011, 19:49:26 UTC
UMM WOW THIS COMMENT, HOLD UP, I CAN'T HANDLE IT.

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