FIC! And more fic soon!

[etain_anders]

I am so pleased I can't stop grinning. Two chapters in four days (admittedly unbeated) and the rest in bits and pieces--this fic could actually be done by the end of summer! Ahem. Reviews are wonderful, constr. criticsm deeply appreciated, & could anyone point me to scans of Tim & Bart's first meeting, and the first YJ comic?

FATHERS & SONS

Comments

[glossing]

I'm really enjoying this and I hope you write more. Tim is appropriately stressed the hell out and Kon, despite being raised by Luthor, is still his sunnily oblivious lovable self. I'm quite taken with the situation you're setting up here.

"If you're not here to blackmail me, then what do you want?"
The guy opened his mouth, then closed, looking, for the first time, rather sheepish. "Um. I wanted to hang out?"
This is *pure* YJ and I loved it.

“But lucky for you I am such a cool guy (and also so totally bored), that I will ignore your incredible meanness and your bad fashion sense and hang out with you anyway.”
*hearts Kon*

“Do you ever think about what’s going to come out of your mouth?”
“Not really, and don’t change the subject. Tell me about this girl.”
You've got a great handle on their bickering. *admires*

I noticed a couple typos/slipups:
if you're going to get all PSM-ing ITYM PMSing
"The vigilante you last night assaulted and threatened to expose and thereby sentence to death." But you said Tim hadn't seen the meta for

[etain_anders]

Thank you! That was such a nice review, I'm smiling like crazy. And thanks for the crit, I fix those as soon as I can. And I'm hoping to update at least once a week, and I've got the next two chapters partially written, so soon, definitely.

[yalover]

Very nice. Loved Tim's little temper tantrum at the end.

[etain_anders]

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[ladymist]

I. . . I don't even have words for how good this is.

I can't wait to see where this is going.

[etain_anders]

I left someone speechless? Awesome, thanks!

And you won't have to wait too long, next update will be within the week.

[vespa331]

awhile ago someone posted some scans of tim+bart's first meeting on Scans_daily. i think it was actually out of costume - they were at the same ski lodge weirdly enough. try looking under the tags for impulse/bart/robin/tim. scans_daily also has a ton of YJ floating around. sorry i can't be more specific, don't have time to hunt them down right now, i'll look later if i can.

the fic is great, i can't wait to read the teamup :)

[etain_anders]

Thanks for the info--I'll check.

And, glad you're enjoying it--I'm going to try to introduce Bart within the next few chapters, so I hope you'll like it.

Also, I love the icon!