[Katekyo Hitman Reborn] Fare Thee Well, Comrade

Jan 06, 2012 15:04

2/5 fills for khrfest from, umm, two years ago.

Title: Fare Thee Well, Comrade
Rating: T
Character/Pairing: Colonnello/Lal
Word Count: 1800+
Prompt: VI-2. Colonnello/Lal Mirch - moments; "a place where the sun once shone and his arm bruised in more places than one"
Summary: Lal learns three things they never taught her in COMSUBIN.

There’s a strategy to this. )

fic, fandom: katekyo hitman reborn!

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moon_over_water January 6 2012, 08:26:46 UTC
I really enjoyed reading this fic. I thought the characterization was right on, and it wasn't overly romantic/unnecessary. I love this pairing so much. Thanks for the read!

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scratchmist January 8 2012, 08:10:47 UTC
You're very much welcome! :) Glad you liked it!

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spiritdream January 6 2012, 17:13:58 UTC
Oh, this is lovely!

Colonnello/Lal Mirch during their COMSUBIN times has always been one of my favorite timelines with this pairing. :) The characterisation is spot-on, their interactions are amazing. Colonnello + game console AND Lal + cooking omg dead. Your writing style is also really nice, natural and flows without a hitch. It was a pleasure reading.

I loved these little snippets, thank you for sharing! ♥

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scratchmist January 8 2012, 08:12:02 UTC
Thank you for reading! Colonnello really strikes me as the dorky, pesky type, with moments of tenderness. I'm really hoping we learn more about their relationship, and their past together, in the current arc. :D

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iam_paranoid January 7 2012, 13:01:33 UTC
This is absolutely lovely. It's smooth and IC at the same time - a perfect mix of fluff and angst and spot-on characterisation. Fandom (in particular, ColoLal) needs more writers like you ;w;

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scratchmist January 8 2012, 08:12:33 UTC
Thank you so much for the kind comment! ♥ I really hope to write more for this fandom - there's so much to explore. :D

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