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indigostohelit June 21 2012, 07:11:23 UTC
gravity don't mean too much to me, the avengers, clint/natasha, pg-13, warnings for cigarette use, guns

(Five.)

Somewhere in the world right now, the Venetian blinds are dappling his coat; somewhere in the world right now, she slinks into his office, dress like a snakeskin and legs all the way up to here; somewhere in the world right now, he blows a long hiss of smoke into the air, grinds his cigarette into a black spot on his desk, snaps and snarks in an accent that's not even his own ( ... )

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sugar_fey June 21 2012, 07:35:45 UTC
Wow, that was fast! AND AWESOME. Thank you so much!

I love all of this, it's still recognisably them, but perfectly adapted for this setting. And the ending is wonderfully ambiguous and very well written.

Somewhere else, Natasha presses one stiletto to the accelerator, and Clint lets the sudden speed snatch his fedora into the spiraling, dusty winds.

This is my favourite line, it says a lot with so few words and I can picture it so clearly.

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book_junkie007 June 21 2012, 18:50:47 UTC
This is absolutely gorgeous. I love it! :D

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eternal_elenea June 24 2012, 05:10:31 UTC
This is utterly fantastic :D.

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