Comments | eternal_ot: Life's Like That !

eternal_ot

Life's Like That !

Jan 28, 2016 21:44

Choices! They carve our life. We all are surrounded by many parallel stories. Some stories we don’t pursue till the end; leaving them halfway to follow something more sparkling to our soul.

While some enamor us till infinity. She was one such story. I was destined to love her till death. Cupid smiled while ( Read more... )

death, mini season, betrayal, love, fiction., ljidol, therealljidol, life, week7

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adoptedwriter January 28 2016, 17:52:55 UTC

Sad but beautifully expressed. Great use of all 4 prompts!

AW

eternal_ot January 29 2016, 11:06:19 UTC

Hey..thanks for the appreciation. Hoping that next week one prompt will grab my attention before the rest ..:)
Good to see you stop by..<3

dee_aar2 January 30 2016, 04:03:47 UTC

This is quite powerful and sad. The style quite different from what your normally try. I loved it .... and then great use of all the prompts. Hugs

eternal_ot January 30 2016, 08:18:02 UTC

Hiya..Yep was tired of fitting in the prompts within the prose. Thought why not a footnote..:) Glad you enjoyed it..and I am hoping next time I favour one prompt over others.
Thanks a ton for stopping over..<3 *Hugs*

thistle_verse January 30 2016, 05:05:46 UTC

Wow! I love that you used all the prompts! That takes some A+ acrobatics in my opinion. And it all works cohesively for your evocative story!

eternal_ot January 30 2016, 08:26:42 UTC

*Takes a graceful bow*..Thanks for such high praise and lovely words.. Makes my day bright..:)
Glad that you enjoyed it..Happy to see you here..<3

halfshellvenus January 30 2016, 08:14:45 UTC

I really like that each of these sections continued from the other so naturally, even as they fulfilled four different prompts.

The third one, especially, tilted the notion of leaving and betrayal by love affair to dying and abandoning a partner long before expected. That was a skilful, poignant shift.

eternal_ot January 30 2016, 08:36:47 UTC

I am so happy to hear that the merger was seamless...was a bit worried about putting the prompts in between..whether it will affect the flow..your words put me at ease..:)

The third one was tricky for me...initially, I did work around separation/divorce but it didn't feel all right...and then this idea popped in..and things fell in place.
Thanks for all the appreciation and a wonderful feedback...:) Glad that you stopped by..<3

whipchick January 30 2016, 14:43:39 UTC

That last line is such a killer in this context - well-done!

eternal_ot January 31 2016, 10:31:38 UTC

Thanks a ton!...makes me feel accomplished :) Appreciate your stopping by <3