Twenty Thousand Gold Stars - Chapter 3

[duskpeterson]

Twenty Thousand Gold Stars. White Rose has lived a double life for too long. For too many years, he has struggled alone to determine how he should handle an ethical dilemma he never wanted to face. Now, finally, he has found help online. But is it the right help?

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[lily22]

What an interesting story so far! Definitely not within my usual scope of topics to read about, but as always, you manage to make it interesting. I respect your choice to backdate the story a bit, so to speak - I don't remember your exact wording in the notes, but it does give the story a touch of uncertainty that I find interesting.

The use of forum posts and email conversations is an effective way to convey different opinions about the different issues discussed, but I fear that they leave less room for the actual plot.

PS. Your latest Eternal Dungeon chapter was also fantastic! The narrator was unexpected, and reminded me of one of your other stories, "The Fool," especially the ending.

[duskpeterson]

"Definitely not within my usual scope of topics to read about