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FIC: Twenty Thousand Gold Stars - A Strikethrough Novel

Jun 07, 2007 14:27

Twenty Thousand Gold Stars. White Rose has lived a double life for too long. For too many years, he has struggled alone to determine how he should handle an ethical dilemma he never wanted to face. Now, finally, he has found help online. But is it the right help?

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lemursexbot June 7 2007, 15:51:24 UTC

I never would have guessed this was written in 2001. The ending especially made me think it was much more recently.

duskpeterson June 7 2007, 16:01:38 UTC

Pagers, fax machines, dial-up modems, no cell phones, no PDAs . . . Yup, I wrote it in 2001. It's amazing how much technology changes in just six years.

reposted... forgot to close my <b> tag andeburu June 10 2007, 02:59:31 UTC

I haven't completed reading the novel yet, but so far I'm really enjoying it. The way it's written with attention to fine detail makes it feel incredibly intimate.

Also, I spotted a typo in Chapter 4:

He released his fingers quickly from the crumpled metal and said stubbornly, "But we are worse of than some other people."

(http://duskpeterson.com/goldstar/04.htm)

I'm looking forward to reading more when I have more time. It's fascinating, so far. :)

Re: reposted... forgot to close my <b> tag duskpeterson June 10 2007, 16:05:53 UTC

"I spotted a typo in Chapter 4"

(Sends you your choice of gourmet desserts.)