I love the way you wrote the Doctor--very in character, very nice.
I love this bit: He didn’t really know what he had been expecting, but he couldn’t help but feel disappointed at not finding Rose standing in front of him wearing that impish grin of hers, tongue tucked in between her teeth.
Nice description of Rose. It is the way I think of her, and at times I find myself smiling with my "tongue tucked in between my teeth" like she does.
Anyways, I also love the desperate rash actions the Doctor makes as well--like when he runs around the building, tells the boys off, and willingly follows a stranger into her flat. Like I said, very in character. Also the opening lines really fit with my theory: even if 10 regenerates, the next rip in the universe that comes along...he is going to go flying towards it.
All in all, great job! Write more soon! I'll be waiting! Cheers!
I definetly smile like that too. I picked up a lot of things from Rose and The Doctor like that and saying "Well" and "Fantastic" a lot as well as scratching behind my ear.. ahh i'm a dork.
i'm really glad you liked it! i'm updating soon i promise.
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chapter 2 soon! :D
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I love this bit: He didn’t really know what he had been expecting, but he couldn’t help but feel disappointed at not finding Rose standing in front of him wearing that impish grin of hers, tongue tucked in between her teeth.
Nice description of Rose. It is the way I think of her, and at times I find myself smiling with my "tongue tucked in between my teeth" like she does.
Anyways, I also love the desperate rash actions the Doctor makes as well--like when he runs around the building, tells the boys off, and willingly follows a stranger into her flat. Like I said, very in character. Also the opening lines really fit with my theory: even if 10 regenerates, the next rip in the universe that comes along...he is going to go flying towards it.
All in all, great job!
Write more soon! I'll be waiting!
Cheers!
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I definetly smile like that too. I picked up a lot of things from Rose and The Doctor like that and saying "Well" and "Fantastic" a lot as well as scratching behind my ear.. ahh i'm a dork.
i'm really glad you liked it! i'm updating soon i promise.
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