I agree with munelit. I can just see it now, Jackie going off on him, the Doctor sitting on the couch, looking embaressed while Rose is either next to him, also looking embaressed, or across from him, catching his eye and rolling her eyes before grinning and winking at him. Can't wait to read the rest!
I like! really interesting plot with the whole no under 21's thing. Aww, poor Doctor, poor Rose!
One teeny tiny thing, if the Jake you're referring to is Preacher!Jake, then he was a Geordie, not a Scotsman, i.e from Newcastle not Scotland. Everything else is great tho!
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"...and The Doctor had been forced to sit through a talk about safe sex with Jackie."
Omg, I mean really--that image is priceless! I can see the Doctor sitting on the couch and Jackie pacing around shouting.
Nice thing with the paper and Rose. I am looking foward to how it all unfolds!
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Wanting that thin spot between worlds /so much/.
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One teeny tiny thing, if the Jake you're referring to is Preacher!Jake, then he was a Geordie, not a Scotsman, i.e from Newcastle not Scotland. Everything else is great tho!
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