[One-shot] Seeing the Unseen

[eternally_4ever]

Title: [One-shot] Seeing the Unseen
Pairing: YunJae
Genre: angst, romance
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Character death

Summary: JaeJoong can see Yunho, but everyone around him denies that he's there. Is he really or is his mind just playing tricks on him?

Comments

[twnklsnowflake]

ma spot

[twnklsnowflake]

I couldn't have come up with a better ending:)
I can't even tell if Yunho was actually real. But why would yunho leave him that easily? I'm confusedxD
I think Jae was hallucinating o_o
I really liked it though..;)

[eternally_4ever]

/blushes. Thanks bb! ♥

I purposely made it confusing *guilty* There are some things better left unanswered :))

Glad u liked it though XDD

[arastal]

its sweet :)

though i kinda wished that jaejoong could scream at that IMAGINARY yunho. some how,somewhere.

thanks. its lovely

[eternally_4ever]

Really? That's a relief XDD

Glad u liked it!! Thanks for reading bb ♥

[saerashi]

AHAH! omg... this is soooooo cool... i mean the way you twist the story around... it's superb. i spotted a few grammatical errors though... but i think it's okay. the story is totally awesome and the ending was totally unexpected... great job dear!

[eternally_4ever]

Heh, I'm glad u liked it ♥♥
Sorry for the mistakes. I changed some of the ones I think were wrong XDD
I'm really happy that the ending wasn't what everyone thought it would be :))
Thanks so much for reading ^^

[gacktprince2008]

wow yunho had finally left jae's mind. i am so happy junsu was there 4 him :)

[eternally_4ever]

I'm glad u enjoyed it :))

Thanks for reading bb! ♥

[teal_wolf]

Although part of me really wanted to know if YunHo was real nor not (but I doubt it if he just disappeared forever - if he was real I'm sure he wouldn't have given up), it's still great to have that uncertainty. So, a wonderful ending. ^_^