[FIC] Love Me Twice (… because I just can’t let you go) [11/??]

Oct 16, 2010 22:09



~Chapter Eleven~

Junsu arose from bed the next morning and stretched his back to loosen up his muscles. Besides his aching body, the first thing that came to his mind that morning was his brother and niece.

He tiptoed over to his bedroom and took a peak at the two. A gladdened smiled appeared on his lips when he saw JaeJoong’s arms protectively ( Read more... )

pairing: yunjae, rating: pg-13, pairing: kimin, genre: angst, genre: romance, fic: love me twice (sequel), genre: m-preg, pairing: yoosu, genre: smut

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ladyelhisa October 17 2010, 02:19:17 UTC
SPOT! OMGEEEEE!! AN update!! *jumps up and down*

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ladyelhisa October 17 2010, 03:28:47 UTC
Awwww... I feel so pitiful for both of them >_<
Oh how I love Junsu here..so much. The way he shows his support is just so touching.
Be strong YUNJAE!

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eternally_4ever October 17 2010, 17:19:30 UTC
I know T^T
Junsu is probably the best brother anyone could ask for Dx

Thanks so much for reading bb ♥

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pinksparkles14 October 17 2010, 02:25:46 UTC
;___________; Poor Joongie and Na Young too. Junsu's right. Yunho has to get rid of Changmin above all else for everything to be okay. >

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eternally_4ever October 17 2010, 17:20:29 UTC
*nods* So true D:

Thanks a bunch for reading bb ♥

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luciuvue October 17 2010, 02:26:23 UTC
Spot? Spot?! o_o

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eternally_4ever October 17 2010, 17:20:56 UTC
All your hon :)

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alicachen October 17 2010, 02:44:03 UTC
Mine,brb

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alicachen October 17 2010, 02:59:56 UTC
Oh My! Yunho still as stupid as last month when you last update T_T
Junsu is true, Yunho must realize that his faults are not as simple as missing a dinner >< *kicks Yunho* stupid-stupid-stupid

Anyway, thanks for the update, I really miss this story..
Hope you're okay with your RL stuff...
Thanks for the hard work

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eternally_4ever October 17 2010, 17:33:25 UTC
Sadly, yes, he is Dx
Junsu is always right^^

No problem hon. Aw, my hiatus should be over in a while, and the fic should be coming to an end soon (hopefully) =D

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blackcherriess October 17 2010, 03:06:30 UTC
SPOT(: thankyou soooo much for updating <3
and hope you're doing well! brb after lunch(:

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blackcherriess October 17 2010, 12:27:26 UTC
love how this chapter shows the vulnerability/despair/anger/hurt in each character so very welll. changmin's part is shorter compared to the rest but his emotions are just so obvious by the way you described his actions and thoughts.

and honestly, i can't believe that na young was able to understand the situation to such an extent but well children can be rather observant of their surroundings. it's no doubt she notices about the absence of her father in her daily life. when i read “I hate appa for making umma cry! I don’t want umma to cry again. I don’t want to leave umma ever.”..., goodness, i just feel like crying. it's just so sad that such a young child can use such a strong word and i do agree that she shouldn't use it on yunho - but at the same time, heartwarming in the sense that she's so sweet to jaejoong, wanting to stay by him and not wanting him to cry anymore.

yunho. *sigh* at least he's starting to admit that he caused the problem. as much as i really dislike yunho for what he has done, i can't help but sympathesize ( ... )

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eternally_4ever October 17 2010, 22:31:29 UTC
Lol, no problem hon^^

Na Young certainly is smart for her age, and yes, she's very good at observing her surroundings. It is a bit sad, but when she's always hanging around Jae instead of Yunho, its easy to see why she's taking his side in all this.

I'll admit that while writing this, I too felt sorry for Yunho, but yeah, at least his eyes are opening up a little and he's seeing for himself that he's a part of the problem as well as Changmin. I know Changmin's part in the chapter was pretty short, but then again, this won't be the last time we'll be seeing him.

Sadly, its seems as though Yunho won't be the only one suffering while the three are apart, all of them will be hurting, JaeJoong especially T^T

Aw, thanks a bunch for reading bb~! The long comment makes me extremely happy as well ♥

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