The result of a collab between
hopechan and I that somehow spawned in the comment threads of her
other hawt porn fic that you should all go read. (That's right, even if you don't like het porn, you should READ IT ANYWAY.) :P Anyway, my overall opinion is that this is actually pretty hot, but that my contributions were useless and drunk and full of fail.
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'and also, anyone who thinks that a cape and giant overdramatic arm gestures are that damn cool has never gotten laid in his life.'
lol! Lulu just loves being dramatic, doesn't he? i bet he thinks that Zero is the coolest thing ever. how... dorky.
i'm just wondering whether Lulu can look at, or even play chess properly ever again? he's totally Suzaku's bitch lol.
oh, i definitely don't mind having more stuff ruined :P if that means you guys would write more fics, it's absolutely a sacrifice worth making! :)
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You know, at first I was actually REALLY EMBARRASSED about how long this was but the more people who comment on it and seem to like it, the better I feel about it. ^___^ It's good to know that reading almost 10,000 words of porn feels as short and enjoyable as WRITING almost 10,000 words of porn. :D
Lulu is only seme if someone is feeling sorry for him and LETS him, rawr. >D
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I'm...actually a clueless fanfic reader.
I don't know much about fanfics, formats, how it happens, how do you write them, how does one enjoy such stories what not, yada the whole deal!!! I am AS CLUELESS AS LELOUCH IS AS A VIRGIN. LOLX.
BUT. Seeing the above comments from others. good god,
I think it i just read some insane 9000++ word count ... smut (?) of awesome-ness?
If i start from here, where do i go to read more that can top such awesome standard of a fic? XD XD XD
(Sorry if I sounded weird and.... bits and pieces) D:
My comments on the fic:
I like how Lelouch plays up to his character from the official series and the possiblility of him acting like with wierd whimpers and tone of voice because of the situation in hand is (i feel) SUPER WELL-THOUGHT AND ACCURATE.
[QUOTE]"Very informative," he breathes.[/QUOTE ( ... )
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And don't worry, your review wasn't weird at all. ^__^ It was positively lovely and I adored it.
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I couldn't get over the fact that Lulu was characterized SO well in this fic. I felt a little out of it with Suzaku's characterization but as I continued reading his being in character meshed in anyway (for me)
And as everyone says, the metaphors, chess, and math, and THE SILK PANTSU! Just made it <3
Please say there's a sequel... *hint hint* seme vengeful!Lulu :3
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(Any blame for piss-poor characterization is probably because of me. D: My bad. But Hope has always written awesome Lulu. ♥ I shall rely on this on future collabs to come.)
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I think this is seriously the best smutfic I'd ever read, I mean, I usually don't even read smutfics. They're boring, even the 'good' ones. But you really wrote it so much right I can't imagine why anyone would not read it after the first two paragraphs for serious. The chess. The calculus. The banter. Lelouch's trainwreck train of thoughts. Wow.
Also, on Suzaku's ICness : This sounds like a badfic response, but honestly and I mean this as a 100% compliment, I don't think anybody cares. WHY SHOULD WE CARE ABOUT GETTING CANCER WHEN IT'S SO GOOOOOOOOD.
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Also, re: your last statement - I lol'd. XD I wish I had that "It's cancer" manga scan from Lolicon Half-Year now...
♥ I love you.
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Thank you for rolling out such a nice fic. I'd forgotten that pr0n is supposed to be fun. ♥
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Porn IS fun! I'd kind of forgotten that, too. All my other fandoms were like blah blah blah waaaaangsty!sex, so it was fun to have Hope beat me into doing something lighter. Ahhh, all credit must go to her~~~
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When I first started to read, I was unfortunately ripped away without being able to finish. Then I came back to it later and got a little further.
And here I am, finally finished with...well, um, guh.
I can't describe it but it's wonderful and addictive and it gave me chills and butterflies and GUH.
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I don't read a lot of smut that has that delightful little twist to it.
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Also, sorry this ridiculously late reply. O.o Apparently this comment never appeared in my inbox. Regardless, I am pleased greatly that you enjoyed this. ^__^
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