[Katekyou Hitman Reborn!]: "The Grey King" (conclusion to 'The Jungle', Hibari/Chrome, and sometimes

Feb 29, 2008 20:14

Well, folks, here we have it. My era of ripping titles off of classic literature authors has now come to end. I'm sure you're all very aggrieved. Well, fear not! I'll be sure to leave an unpleasant taste in your mouth with this fic for days to come! :D ( Read more... )

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j3tfire March 6 2008, 06:41:18 UTC
hello again, i did follow up with your next two parts after The Raven...well after mopping the floor...weather's cold so i thought smut might make me sweat since the mopping didn't lol. you have sufficiently delayed me from my lunch and i'm hungry (oh no *channels hibari from the plane scene* but damn no, i mean i'm hungry for a real, proper meal XD ( ... )

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aradiantsun March 6 2008, 23:30:13 UTC
*burbles happily* I really have no superlatives that I could even attempt to use as praise for this lovely masterpiece you've written. I feel really lame and stupid that I am not able to leave a super awesome review like all the other before me, but this was a really joy and pleasure to read. I would share all my favorite parts, but there's just so many (the whole entire thing, really). All three of them are so utterly perfect and IC that I'm inspired to write them more, but hesitant because whatever I come up with will pale in comparison to this.

Thank you so much for sharing this. (And I am planning on writing TsunaHaru, since that pairing really does need more love.)

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niceweatherrr March 7 2008, 00:34:54 UTC
I think I might die with happiness.
Well, no, not really, but still.

I. Love. Your. Writing. SO BAD. Despite what you say.
That man was growing careless, all because of him? Mukuro was almost touched.
HEEEEE. I must mention how much I utterly adore your way of portraying these characters so splendidly. It's rare to come upon such a wonderfully-written piece. I couldn't stop thinking about it throughout the day (yes, I am that weird), and upon rushing home, had to finish the third part. A definite add to memories, both LJ and real life. :']

1896, 6996, 6918, my most favorite pairings, all here! It was an explosion of awesome on my screen in the form of words. The note of names and language, and elaborate design of the prison + fight tactics made this all the more impressive. This last part was my favorite. Mm, action. <3 Thank you so much for writing this, it was simply amazing to read ( ... )

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kill_me_faster June 14 2008, 14:37:00 UTC
INORITE? Three weeks worth of work, sucka.

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kill_me_faster June 14 2008, 14:45:56 UTC
Actually, believe it or not, I don't feel cheated. ^^; All of the comments I got on this were really nice, and if the FMA fandom has taught me anything, it's that sometimes the GREATEST THINGS IN THE UNIVERSE.......... are impossible to comment on.

Not that I'm saying this is the greatest thing in the universe or anything. I have, after all, had vanilla bean cheesecake.

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gayboytano September 19 2009, 21:03:04 UTC
this entire fic is absolutely amazing! i've been unhappy with the lack of good 1896 fics i've been looking for lately but this, this was very satisfying. the characters are all nicely in character and the plot was really good and helpful, actually, to the smut in the middle ^^

and as rune said in one of her posts, i really felt like i was reading straight from the manga most of the time > > especially with the action part, it was so wonderful, and i can totally picture the illusion mukuro standing in front of the imprisoned mukuro. and also, mukuro LOL-ing half the time was absolutely great, it made me lol too!!!! hmmm but i think that smut part makes mukuro officially a voyeur... oh well...

the only thing i have to say is that the ending is really confusing to me @_@ it's nicely written and all, but ultimately confusing, i don't get it > > hmmm and i think that's everything i have to say about this, other than i hope to see more works from you sometime, cuz you are a great writer ^^

~K

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