[Katekyou Hitman Reborn!]: "Metamorphosis" (D18 for yamikakyuu)

Mar 10, 2008 10:35

A drabble for yamikakyuu, as thanks for requesting of mikoo on AnimeSuki my current avatar. (The world needs more dansen!Chrome, I swear.) I also got dansen!6996, but this one comes first on my icon list so it's the one I decided to post with. ^^; She requested something Hibari-centric, but I stretched it even further just for her and made it D18, as well. ( ( Read more... )

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yamikakyuu March 10 2008, 18:47:15 UTC
I..ah..cant...coherent...on...floor...awesome...cant..breath...you..awesome..

will...post...later when I...can...type/talk/whatveer...

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kill_me_faster March 10 2008, 20:04:06 UTC
Uh...don't die? ^^;; Really, I mean, it's not that good. I felt really bad that I wasn't able to write anything better than this. I might go back and revise it at some point, I dunno. I wish it was loooooooonger. But somehow it wound up this short, OTL.

WARUI NA. D: Don't hate me?

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yamikakyuu March 10 2008, 20:16:46 UTC
WOMAN SHADDUP!!!! IT WAS AWESOME!!!! If you say it was bad one more time Im coming through my comp at you!! Seriously! so better then I had anticapted!! Everything, the setting, the gestures, THE PRON!! YOU SAID THERE WAS GONNA BE NO PRON YOU LIED!! THANK YOU FOR LYING!!! It was awesome!

WARUI NA. D: Don't hate me?

I LUV U!!!! 8D

beware spaztic post coming to my lj soon XD

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kill_me_faster March 11 2008, 20:18:54 UTC
I guess I'm just frustrated because I really wanted to go more in depth with this but I got lazy? I guess is what I'm trying to say. ^^;; Upon re-read, it's not TERRIBLE, but I still wish it was better. *sigh*

YOU SAID THERE WAS GONNA BE NO PRON YOU LIED!! THANK YOU FOR LYING!!!

XD;; To me, a BJ isn't honest-to-God "porn", though. You'll find that I make this statement a lot. *fail* So maybe what I say isn't quite an accurate description of what's going on...? I dunno.

Still, your comment made me lol, regardless. ♥

I guess, in the end, I can be satisfied so long as you like it, Yami. ^__^ Since I wrote it for you.

I saw that spastic post, and I am BEET-RED from all the love. *loves back*

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rukawagf March 10 2008, 21:09:33 UTC
I... I... flailed.

let me erm... breathe

and come back.

hold on... breathe.. breathe... breeatttthhhhhhhheeeeeeee....

my 3 fav pairings are hiba x tsuna, dino x hiba and tsuna x goku.

at this rate yer just 1 away from completing the best 3 fics for me to read.... omg...

i..
b
back

after...

oxygen....

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yamikakyuu March 10 2008, 21:18:31 UTC
SEE!! I couldnt breathe either at first!! XD

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rukawagf March 10 2008, 21:19:17 UTC

He was rewarded with silence; the answer he expected, the answer he got..... Another answer in and of itself .....Understanding the student was part of being the tutor

Oh My Gawd.

I'll never cease to stop worshipping you. I swear. XD

Honestly, i dun think i ever need to write fics if you can please continue down this road? XD XD (too bad your fav pairing isn't mine T.T)

so he dug deeper, at great risk to his personal assests (arms, legs, groin, etc.)
yes dino, groins are quite an important personal asset XD

If you say anything else, you'll be closer to the truth than I like, was the meaning of that particular threat
YER DINO READS HIBARI LIKE A BOOK!

i don't think i've ever read a fic like this before o.o;;;

perfect bait. "You know, Kyoya," he said, smiling his bold Italian smile, toes wiggling in his shoes; "I'm not afraid of you."

what a PERFECT bait!! let's also include the cute toes wiggling in his shoes for the side effects! OH GAWD DEMI!!!! i can't ask you to marry me sadly so... let me flail madly from afar~~~! ( ... )

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rukawagf March 10 2008, 21:38:16 UTC
What's your point? His hair shaded his eyes.
i like how your hibari doesn't say but the reader's can know what he thinks and so does dino~~~<3

(The look that had melted the hearts of the most frigid women in Italy, though Dino himself was actually unaware of it. He'd always thought he was just being nice.)
I MELTED INTO A PUDDLE TO THE EXTREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEME!

"You're without peer, Kyoya."
whoa............. what a way to capture him Dino.........

pinned to the ground by a pale, spider-thin fist.
that is a NICE description....

Oh shit the kiss scene. *insert more flailing here*

okies... digging the nail to dirt meant........... ....... i got ideas but.... ...

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nymous_fic March 10 2008, 22:50:07 UTC
So Ruka pointed me in this direction because it was OMG DINO/HIBARI, and I know you also wrote that Hibari/Chrome fic trilogy that everyone and their mother has been reccing to me but that I have yet to read because of schoolwork and everything, BUT. BUT. I am weak when it comes to Dino/Hibari, and this DRABBLEwtf is only 3360 words WHUT, so I shoved work aside for a while to read it...

aksaksljd;ladkfskldfa

When I read the title, I got really intrigued thinking that maybe someone was going to turn into a bug, BUT ALAS. Still still, you compared Hibari to Romulus, oh Romulus, and and and Namimori is... his Rome? His Calliope ahhhhh-- I would've thought that Remus and Romulus was more Bel and his dead twin, but this works beautifully too, because guh, without peer, and oh, how lonely, how-- how grand. Nngk.

And oh, Dino figuring Hibari out little by little, and how the curl of Hibari's fingers could mean so much, and ahh ahhhhh the blow job akshdla;lk ahahaha awesome.

seeing the clouds look like clouds, for a change, instead of the ( ... )

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kill_me_faster March 11 2008, 20:22:43 UTC
Ahahahaha... ^^;; I did get an awful lot of recs for that 1896 trilogy, didn't I. *blush*

Anyway, I'm glad you commented on the Calliope thing, because Calliope is a muse, see, the one of epic poetry, and I figured freaking realms_of_life, THE GURU OF ALL THINGS LITERATURE, would have said something, but she didn't, so now you're my favorite person in the whole universe. ♥

I'm not a shipper of D18, and have read maybe two fics for the pairing, ever, but I got tired of Dino being written as legally retarded or whatever. How else would he be alive, if he weren't smart, and kind of cunning? O.o (I mean, only the main character is allowed to have THAT MUCH DUMB LUCK in a manga, orz.) So I tried to write him like this. I'm glad it was a success (?). ^___^

Romario undoubtedly got cholera from his coffee because, uh, hermits. And black water. O.o

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realms_of_life March 12 2008, 05:40:54 UTC
See I didn't comment because I'm a dork. I have no excuse. When I read it, I was like Calliope, muse, epic poetry, check. :) The truth is FOR A SECOND THERE I THOUGHT EVERYBODY KNEW CALLIOPE WAS A MUSE and there was no need to comment on it. I mean, isn't that like... common knowledge??? ;_____;

*head/desk*

Answer to self: OF COURSE IT ISN'T. OH MY GOD REALMS, WHICH PLANET DO YOU LIVE IN? No wonder dates RUN AWAY FROM YOU SCREAMING.

*fails at life*

Also, your capslock is contagious.

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runesque March 12 2008, 06:17:56 UTC
You're the only one who gets my lame "sleeping with fishes and Fredo" joke, my "this drabble has more dialogue than Death In Venice" poking and agreed with me that Ulysses is hard to get.

So, yes, you fail at normal life. Run off to Jupiter, you, and keep those code-named beings company with your Neil Gaiman gushing.

And, yes, Demi's capslocking habit is certainly contagious.

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ex_nightray March 10 2008, 23:00:59 UTC
So I was directed here from Yami's LJ and I must say this:

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kill_me_faster March 11 2008, 20:23:10 UTC
HOLY GOD CHRIST, THAT IS THE BIGGEST HEART I HAVE EVER SEEN. YOU MUST GET, LIKE, .007 BPM TO THAT SUCKER OR SOMETHING.

♥?

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sapphire_18 March 10 2008, 23:32:28 UTC
LOL Rune, I like how I've assimilated about half of your friend's list.
i think you just snagged another one right here~♥

His seiyuu gives me a goddamned orgasm every time I watch the anime, though. Plz to be telling me I'm not the only one who feels this way.
omg! you're not alone in this one! i was thinking the same thing earlier and was like "omg! his seiyuu is so perfect for him! he's making me sizzle!" lol >XD

too much to quote! i love the fic! now i see why yami and rune has been spazzing over your fics... gah~ this just added more fuel to my spazzing over Hibari and Dino earlier~ added you btw~ ♥

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sapphire_18 March 10 2008, 23:38:55 UTC
oh oh! i was directed here by yami's spazzing post btw... >XD

mmm~ so much yaminess~ *pats yami* XD

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yamikakyuu March 11 2008, 00:23:14 UTC
SAPPHI!!! Yes more fangirls come to read this awesome fict!

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sapphire_18 March 11 2008, 00:53:02 UTC
YAMI!!!!! mwahahaha! I ish here! lol XD omg... after spazzing in my lj on Dino and Hibari, i read your post and came here... i died~ i died over and over again~ ♥ now all i need is Mukuro and my day would be complete! ♥ >XD

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