periphery - harry/louis, liam/louis - standalone [3/3]

[russsel]

Title: periphery
Pairings: Harry/Louis, Liam/Louis
Genre: AU, Angst, Paranormal
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Character death
Summary: After a car accident, Louis goes on pretending that nothing ever happened.

Comments

[upagainstspace]

this was so brilliant. i teared up so many times oh my god.
well done on writing harry in so perfectly, i absolutely loved how louis is so unstable about it all and can hear him and it's just perfect you know, cause it's believable. and how harry is like, jealous, cause of liam. that was brilliant.
ugh i cannot tell you how much i love this.

[russsel]

thank you! my original idea was just basically louis trying to move on from the accident and he sees harry less and less as the days go by but i was struck by the idea to make it almost like a fixation forming a mind of its own and all of a sudden, louis can't control it anymore and it starts to mess with him and all that.

thank you so, so much for this brilliant comment!

[badjujuboo]

amazing, absolutely amazing. It was heartbreaking and gave me CHILLS when Harry put his hands around Lou's neck the first time and asked him to come with. I loved Zayn in this - the best friend trying to find that medium between comfort and worry and Liam - oh LIAM you perfect human bean you! Loved it!

[russsel]

lakajlksd i have no words but THANK YOU FOR THIS COMMENT OMG i'm super psyched you liked it and yeah, liam's basically taken over my life lately and i basically wrote him as the perfect prince charming because he is.

thank you so much this is literally perfect and you're flawless~

[secondhandbrain]

Another marvelous story! I'm glad Louis could finally move on, cause he really deserved it. :)

I'm internally screaming cause I love Zayn here! True friendship is about insulting and caring about the people in your life. BWAhahaha!

PS: I must say I was secretly expecting Niall to pop up and be that guy to put a stop to Zayn's club life (don't mind my randomness). tee-hee!

[russsel]

thank you! yeah, the accident just took a lot out of him and even though i love it when my characters suffer, i just had to give him a happy ending because of everything he went through.

yes! i wouldn't consider someone a friend if i can't be comfortable enough to insult them tbh

omg i love that idea but it would have made this much longer than it already is haha!

[cool_kilua]

I'm reading this at 3 AM with the lights off and to say the truth I got scared! lol

Harry’s always been the best at hide and seek.

Just reading this gave me the creeps!
Very well written and you described emotionally unstable Louis very well
Amazing story, had me on my toes the whole time

[russsel]

omg i'm sorry! but i'm really glad you got that response because i wanted to make it as chilling and creepy as i could and it's nice to know i accomplished that somewhat. :)

thank you so much for this comment, i'm happy you enjoyed it!