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Jul 31, 2005 13:59

I bent my head towards the sun as it came to meet me ( Read more... )

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broken_reckuiem August 1 2005, 01:21:03 UTC
I like your writing style.

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etherealhammer August 3 2005, 08:04:09 UTC
Thanks

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uh oh crystaljoelle August 1 2005, 03:11:50 UTC
"Hammer-Usually associated with the smith, the hammer has the mystical power of creation. (from Circlot)"

That's quoted from my Mythology lecture online... it seemed interesting enough to post here.

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Re: uh oh wordstoread August 1 2005, 10:16:02 UTC
what is going on?

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Re: uh oh etherealhammer August 3 2005, 08:11:50 UTC
As I have said before:

Like neptune tumbling from a bed of lice
My creation's lacking's artifice

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first chapter anonymous August 1 2005, 18:02:38 UTC
i cant wait to read the rest of what you have so far. the way you put words together, i can see and hear and feel the story. i especially like "I tried to talk but couldn't for fear of drowning out the sound of her breath." and the description of the girl

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darkwoundedrose August 2 2005, 03:48:27 UTC
breath taking

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etherealhammer August 3 2005, 08:04:28 UTC
Much thanks

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