first chapter
anonymous
August 1 2005, 18:02:38 UTC
i cant wait to read the rest of what you have so far. the way you put words together, i can see and hear and feel the story. i especially like "I tried to talk but couldn't for fear of drowning out the sound of her breath." and the description of the girl
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That's quoted from my Mythology lecture online... it seemed interesting enough to post here.
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Like neptune tumbling from a bed of lice
My creation's lacking's artifice
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