Lie to Me fic: He Has Departed From This Strange World A Little Ahead Of Me (1/1) pg-13

[etoilefilante]

Title: He Has Departed From This Strange World A Little Ahead of Me
Gillian, Cal/Gillian, Emily, Loker, Reynolds, Torres, Zoe - character death, pg-13
Words: 1,476

Disclaimer: I do not own this show or these characters. And I hope they never do this.

Author's notes:
1.A massive thank you to my beyond wonderful beta, tempertemper77 for taking time out at

Comments

[eglvm]

That was so sad but so beautiful. I'm going to "memory" this. :)

[etoilefilante]

Thank you so much for coming over and reading and commenting! I'm glad you like it enough to memory it. :)

[graziaplena]

This made me cry, too! Only one other piece of fanfiction I have ever read in my life has made me do that, so this is high praise. :)

You write so well...your prose is so elegant and thoughtful. I have to go explore your other LTM fic right now. :D And I can't wait to read what you write next!

[etoilefilante]

Wow, I feel very honoured hearing that. I'm not sure it's deserved, but thank you so much for your kind words. :) Elegance is something I strive for so I'm happy to hear you think it to be so.

I hope you enjoy the rest of the fic, none of it is as angsty as this one! And there's Christmas fic on the way tomorrow to make up for making people cry with this one today. :)

Thank you again. ♥

[bevfank]

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Beautifully written. As someone who has unexpectedly and suddenly lost someone close I found this very moving and an accurate description of feelings and emotions that someone going through that would experience.

Can't wait for the fluffy, happy ending fic later. ^_^

[etoilefilante]

I'm sorry for your loss. I have experienced the same thing so I suppose I felt I had enough to draw on to write the emotions in this. I hope it didn't upset you too much to read it. Thank you for reading and leaving me your comments, though. ♥

Christmas fic with a guaranteed happy ending coming soon! :)

[filminspired]

Wow, this is so depressing. So so sad, great job though because you definitely evoked emotions!

[etoilefilante]

Ha, I'm sorry. I'm glad it succeeded in evoking emotions, though! Christmas fic coming tomorrow to make up for this.

[yazizzle33]

Oh man, this was so perfectly sad. :( The ending 3-4 paragraphs I swear had me in tears the most. Great job, hon! You can only draw this much emotion from a person with beautiful writing such as this, and for that I thank you.

[etoilefilante]

Oh wow, thank you. I'm sorry I made you cry. But thank you for saying that, it means a lot. I thank you. ♥

[yazizzle33]

Awww, you're too sweet! *hugs*