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Lie to Me Fic: though the strands fall from her ponytail (1/1)

Sep 03, 2010 16:31

Title: though the strands fall from her ponytail
Cal/Gillian, 2x20 Exposed missing scene, angst, pg

Words: 710

Author’s Notes: Thank you to my beta, tempertemper77 for looking over this so quickly and for catching the silly mistakes my tired mind let slip! This is set during Exposed between the second-to-last and last scenes.

( “I’m fine,” she finally says, but knows her voice is quiet and her words don’t quite ring true. )

creative: writing, pairing: you were protecting me?, tv: human lie detectors

Comments 37

vickysg1 September 5 2010, 08:44:46 UTC

Lovely story. And I'm glad that she lets him in, in both ways.

etoilefilante September 6 2010, 13:48:14 UTC

Thank you! I really appreciate the comments. I'm glad you liked it.

solaris242 September 5 2010, 09:30:45 UTC

Beautiful work. I love the atmosphere of the piece.. very simple, but says so much.

(Tis xfirefly9x btw. Using Zach's computer, so.. :P)

etoilefilante September 6 2010, 13:48:39 UTC

Aww, thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. :)

lynnonpointe February 19 2011, 19:40:43 UTC

Domesticity is so much win in my book, and this captures it beautifully. <3 And of course he doesn't pull on her hair too hard! He did raise a daughter after all. ;)

etoilefilante February 20 2011, 11:49:47 UTC

Thank you! Hee, yes exactly. :)