lie to me fic: the world is changed and we are broken (1/1) gillian, cal, pg-13

Dec 19, 2010 17:03

Title: the world is changed and we are broken
Gillian, Cal, Wallowski, post-3x01 In the Red, pg-13

Words: 490

Author’s Notes: Thank you to my beta, tempertemper77. I felt Cal deserved some comeuppance for his behavior in 3x01, and since I’ve been ridiculously busy with work since then I’ve only managed to get it written now.

Really, Cal? Is that the way this is going to go now? )

creative: writing, pairing: you were protecting me?, tv: human lie detectors

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crumpled_up December 20 2010, 05:48:20 UTC
Oooh. Gillian totally needed to just get up in his face after that whole stupid issue at the end of that ep. I want her to lash out more! And maybe slap him one day. He deserves that. I love it. Her little rant was awesome and part of me wants to see someone tackle a 'what if' issue if Gillian did walk away from his life back then.

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etoilefilante December 21 2010, 11:31:00 UTC
Thank you! I want her to lash out more, too! Cal really deserves it. At some point (in season 4, which we will be getting) there needs to be a breaking point where she just says enough is enough. I really want to see that happen!

The 'what if' question is a fascinating one. I think you should write it!!

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spyglass_ December 20 2010, 05:49:08 UTC
So basically, this is what happens in my head!canon after 3x01. I am VERY happy you wrote this!

Bonus points for Picture of Dorian Gray, also. One of my favorites ♥

I will come back to your other fic when I have finally caught up on LtM, but I did want to comment that you used Flicker, which is my Carter/Anna song. I thought you would want to know. Hee.

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etoilefilante December 21 2010, 11:32:34 UTC
Hee, I'm glad! I do so love writing canon for people when canon itself is useless. ♥

Carter/Anna!! Not to sound like a broken record, but the day you write Carter/Anna I am going to be soooo happy.

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devilz_haircut December 20 2010, 06:54:34 UTC
First of all, The Picture of Dorian Gray! Oh, come on, I fell in love with this before I even really began reading it. And I was right, hehe :) Very in-character, love it!

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etoilefilante December 21 2010, 11:33:06 UTC
Thank you!! So glad you loved it. :)

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missymeggins December 21 2010, 04:26:53 UTC
THIS! Oh, this should be real. And it in my head it is. I cannot believe that Gillian would ever just take all this crap without lashing out a little, even though the show seems to think she would.

This outburst is exactly what Cal needed to hear.

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etoilefilante December 21 2010, 11:34:59 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you could see it happening, too. I'm just tired of Gillian taking it without saying anything. There needs to be a massive fallout at some point. Maybe that'll be what finally prompts Cal to move past his fears.

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missymeggins December 21 2010, 12:26:52 UTC
Me too. It's completely ridiculous to think that Gillian would just take all this crap. I mean, the early days of season 1 were ALL about their partnership and how strong it was. Enough's enough, she needs to take a stand. I really hope the writers can see that and will use it as the catalyst it could be for Cal to get over his shit and move on.

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madampresident December 26 2010, 18:09:53 UTC
No kidding, Cal has been a huge asshat recently. Foster is a saint. This is a great follow up to 3x01

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etoilefilante December 29 2010, 14:00:18 UTC
He really has. I hope he's changing back to more of his season 1 self in the episodes we still have coming. Thank you!

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