Lie to Me fic: I am a constant satellite (aka five times Cal touches Gillian(& one time he doesn't))

Dec 20, 2012 20:53

title: I am a constant satellite (aka. five times Cal touches Gillian (and one time he doesn’t))
Cal/Gillian, 3230 words, pg-13

Author's Notes: A big thank you to my beta, tempertemper who, two years after this show ended, is still happy to read my ramblings and give me the confidence to post. Any dialogue you recognise has only been used to set the scene. ( Read more... )

creative: writing, pairing: you were protecting me?, tv: human lie detectors

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canterlevi December 21 2012, 03:44:28 UTC
Aw, man, the progression from friends to lovers is so well written (and really, downright sexy at 6.)

Why does it seem like there are fanfic writers who know how to handle the characters better than the actual writers? You, my dear, are one of those fanfic writers.

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etoilefilante December 23 2012, 23:49:57 UTC
Thank you so much. Your words really mean a lot to me! I love writing these characters, and I'm so thrilled that you rate my interpretations that highly.

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vickysg1 December 21 2012, 13:19:32 UTC
Once again, this is so perfect. I love the slow evolution from friends to something more. And the last part is really beautiful, and yes, I was a tiny bit afraid here at the end of part 5.

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etoilefilante December 23 2012, 23:51:49 UTC
Thank you!! I was actually only able to write part 5 knowing that 6 was following it! I'm so glad you enjoyed this.

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crumpled_up December 22 2012, 06:31:48 UTC
Oh the progression and the quiet moments. You are fantastic at that. I love their differing thoughts on each situation. I pretty much just love it all. As much as I love the last two, I think the fourth one that's about Sweet Sixteen just about killed me. Maybe because that's one of my all time favorite eps (if not the absolute fav), but just the loyalty and Cal's realization at how much it cost her to protect him when she didn't even know him at the time. Just fantastic. So glad you're back to writing these two. How I've missed them.

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etoilefilante December 23 2012, 23:53:50 UTC
You!! Thank you! Sweet Sixteen and all the backstory and all the feelings... I could write about it forever. Thank you so much, your comments always make me smile. ♥ (I am still writing my epic, believe it or not. It truly is still coming.)

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many thanks for a great story! ext_3611442 April 24 2016, 23:17:04 UTC
this could fairly easily be adapted to a book, but in this form it is breathtaking, and wonderful!

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many thanks for a great story! ext_3611442 April 25 2016, 00:22:56 UTC
this could fairly easily be adapted to a book, but in this form it is breathtaking, and wonderful!

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