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Mar 03, 2006 01:52

Novel Number Two:

Rabbit-heart Girl's Broken Dream Tonic
a cure-all collection of short stories for the prevention and treatment of broken or lost hearts, dreams, souls, spirits and the like.

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MEZCAL [ jealousy ] mezcal March 6 2006, 23:25:09 UTC

For some reason

I wanted to find something changable,

But I failed.

Quite brilliant, really.

-MEZCAL

Re: MEZCAL [ jealousy ] eulaliacarp March 12 2006, 08:45:18 UTC

what do you mean you wanted to find something changeable?

Re: MEZCAL [ jealousy ] mezcal March 12 2006, 16:50:17 UTC

I wanted to be able to show you that I read your story, and not only that, but to do you the favor of suggestings any changes/fixes, as you mentioned you really wanted to know. But I found nothing of consequence. It's a compliment.

-MEZCAL

Re: MEZCAL [ jealousy ] eulaliacarp March 13 2006, 20:36:12 UTC

i thought i replied to this a couple days ago, but i guess it didn't work... anyway. thank you. that surprises me really. i keep thinking it's not as good as it could be. like with most of my writings. but i did work hard on this one to try and make it as good as possible. i didn't show it to anyone for three years. i just didn't think it was ready. and although i made only minor changes during that time, i think they were significant. no doubt you will have plenty of helpful suggestions for my stories to come.

aariel March 11 2006, 02:35:23 UTC

It's very beautiful. What made you write it?