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eunjewel

Ashes Of The Innocent (5/?)

Jul 07, 2011 23:18

Title: Ashes Of The Innocent (5/?)
Pairing: HaeHyuk, slight KyuMin
Genre: AU, Action/Adventure
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Mafia AU. A young boy who's had everything taken away from him at just 9 years old returns with a vengeance 18 years later to exact revenge. But with all that have changed, revenge isn't necessarily as straightforward as it seems... Or ( Read more... )

fanfiction: ashes of the innocent, pairing: kyumin, group: super junior, genre: au, pairing: haehyuk, rating: pg-13, genre: action/adventure

Comments 33

shin_ah_mi July 7 2011, 16:08:17 UTC

what bothers me that hae is so into his revenge that he is anaware how much hyuk got to like him...he will eventually hurt him so much if he continues...
kyumin...wae so cute?!!!

eunjewel July 7 2011, 16:18:41 UTC

hmm but it isn't really hae's revenge? though he would hurt hyuk eventually, of course... D: haha i think kyumin's pretty fun to write, sometimes xD thanks for commenting! ^^

arisueyuki July 7 2011, 16:35:12 UTC

lick

arisueyuki July 8 2011, 01:58:21 UTC

huaa~ I think donghae is start to fall for hyuk~~
hmmm~~ min and kyuhyun is also start to fall each other I think XD
ahh~ glad that teukie identity does not found by minnie~~
hauu~~ poor teukie pas ;~;
updatee soonn unnie XD
can't wait for more :D

eunjewel July 8 2011, 12:22:07 UTC

haha indeed perhaps he is. and kyumin's a classic case of love at first sight. maybe. xD i will try to update soon while i'm still free hehehe.. thanks for commenting dear dongsaeng~! :D

marie_gable July 7 2011, 18:13:41 UTC

I was getting worried for a sec...I thought Sungmin would become suspicious of Leeteuk *phew*
but ummm Hae.....he is so slow. When will he fall in love!!!!
I'm not really sympathetic of lee soo man. Hyuk isn't his real son, he doest belong to him...so bphe better back off :)
Thanks for updating (^^)

eunjewel July 8 2011, 12:23:08 UTC

hahahaha soon soon 8D i can't wait for him to fall in love as well lol! ahahaha poor lsm, he has no supporters at all xDD thanks for commenting! :D

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eunjewel July 8 2011, 12:28:55 UTC

haha everyone hates him. maybe i should change the genre to angst when hyukkie finds out the truth. lol. dont be so nervous ahaha and donghae is in the process of falling in love, don't worry ahahaha.

don't worry too much about hae and the rest xD and i'm glad u like the kyumin part here! xD thanks for commenting! :D

brattygurl2011 July 7 2011, 21:47:13 UTC

Hae is right to be worried for Hyuk when he finds out that his biological brother wants to put LSM in jail and finding out that LSM is the one who killed his biological parents. Even though the world may think LSM is evil, Hyuk only knows him as a loving father so it'll be a shock and he might not want to believe it, or even if he does believe it, he may stay by LSM's side. A lot of complications to get in the way of justice and love. And Teuk's right thinking that Hyuk will be so sad and angry when he finds out that Hae only became his friend in order to put his dad in jail. No one wins in this story. Like your summary says, nothing is straight forward. I'm liking the budding relationship between Kyu and Min though. And, I'm interested in why LSM decided to keep Hyuk instead of killing him and why he never went after Teuk. Another layer to this wonderful story.

eunjewel July 8 2011, 12:33:10 UTC

haha you've totally grasped what i was trying to show xD so awesome! as to why lsm kept hyuk and not teuk... that's another secret O: hahahaha it'll be revealed in due time, don't worry ^^

kyumin wasnt a pairing i planned for, actually, so i'm glad it worked out hehe. and i think u're too kind with your words ahaha thanks for the compliment!! ♥