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LJ Idol: Prompt 1

Oct 20, 2011 15:04

LJ Idol prompt numero uno: When you pray, move your feet

Just my first entry for LJ idol. I hate posting anything I write publicly, so I'm trying really hard to get over that.

( LJ Idol Entry 1 )

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Comments 45

zeitgeistic October 21 2011, 02:51:04 UTC

I like how you segmented this; it gives it a very intense feeling. Very interesting!

euphonious_13 October 25 2011, 13:57:14 UTC

I'm glad it gave off some intensity! Thank you for reading :)

wolfden October 21 2011, 02:53:29 UTC

I like this. The pushing through speaks to me.

I don't usually post publicly either. It definitely is a bit daunting.

euphonious_13 October 25 2011, 13:57:53 UTC

Oh good! Thank you for giving it a read :)

I am terrified of public posting!

sweeny_todd October 21 2011, 03:53:44 UTC

I like the staccato nature of the sentences in between. It really adds to that feeling of movement.

euphonious_13 October 25 2011, 13:58:19 UTC

I was hoping it would do that rather than feel awkward and out of place. Thank you for reading :)

shadowwolf13 October 21 2011, 05:32:36 UTC

Great post! I love your determination. :)

euphonious_13 October 25 2011, 13:58:27 UTC

Thanks! :D

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euphonious_13 October 25 2011, 13:58:42 UTC

Thank you and I will!