FIC: Things That Change, 20/?

[eutychides]

Title: Things That Change [20/?]
Rating: NC17
Disclaimer: This story is based on characters and situations created and owned by JK Rowling, various publishers including but not limited to Bloomsbury Books, Scholastic Books and Raincoast Books, and Warner Bros., Inc. No money is being made and no copyright or trademark infringement is intended.

Comments

[spiffarific]

Autumn is an ugly mess of endless grey days and rainy, cold nights, but with the advent of December, the landscape changes into a beautiful canvas of frost-dusted tree branches and snow that dusts the ground around Christmas time, something that Harry doesn’t remember having happened in a long while.

I can see it and feel it and I love this world you've created so much.

Everything hurts but then there are those moments

but squeezing just enough to make Harry stop breathing when Malfoy mumbles, “I’m not asleep, idiot.”

and I melt faster than the snow outside.

[eutychides]

Thank you so much! :)

[meddie_flow]

very nice Christmas (Eve) pressie!!!

i love your story. haven't read anything this realistic in quite a while.

[eutychides]

You're welcome! :)

[mitzi007]

This is so amazing, it's somehow so different from any other H/D I have read. I get the feeling this is what their relationship would really be like. Same goes for mpreg, usually it just makes me roll my eyes, but this feels real.

[eutychides]

Thank you so much! ;)

[valkyrie17]

Don't remember if i have commented before, but just wanted to let you know that I really like this story.
It's amusing that after 18 years it's Harry & Malfoy...

[eutychides]

Thank you! (And the issue you mention will be addressed in subsequent parts) :)

[anonymous]

Oh gorgeous! This is amazing, as always. Abraxas, he's such a darling. Takes right after his daddy. *huggles him*

The characterization of Harry is so realistic. The way he questions himself over Ginny but then reassures himself is...human.

Also, this was the most perfect scene:

They play a fast, unfair game- Potters against Weasleys. Malfoy scowls at being called a Potter, but he seems to forget when he hurls the Quaffle toward Ron's head a few too many times. Abraxas finds it funny, and he laughs nearly as hard as Malfoy does. Ron, in return, has Peter bat Bludgers at Malfoy until Malfoy flies into Ron, crashing them both to the ground and ending in a fistfight, if Harry and Hermione hadn’t pulled them apart first.

[eutychides]

I should think Abraxas takes after the Malfoy side of things, considering his name!

Thank you so much! :)