FIC: Things That Change, 25/26

[eutychides]

Title: Things That Change [25/26]
Rating: NC17
Disclaimer: This story is based on characters and situations created and owned by JK Rowling, various publishers including but not limited to Bloomsbury Books, Scholastic Books and Raincoast Books, and Warner Bros., Inc. No money is being made and no copyright or trademark infringement is intended.

Comments

[lily_bywater]

Such a strong opening of the chapter! If I was Harry I'd be deadly afraid every time I stepped through the front door.

Third cousins aren't all that bad, but with all the inbreeding going on in the wizarding world I'm suprised the kids aren't born with gills and just one eye.

Jesus, Viola. So obviously my guess was way off, I never figured her old enough for pregnancy. This is so scary, and I'm feeling ill right along with Harry :/

This family is so fucked up, but that makes me love them even more. One chapter left, and I don't know what to excpect. But there is hope at least :)

[eutychides]

If anyone in fandom wrote a fic in which a Black family member had gills, I would worship them, lily_bywater.

Thank you so much! Viola's 14 now, so she's old enough, but too young, too, at the same time. Ah, Potters! ;)

[postingwhore]

omfg. Fuck. Fuck. You and your fucking bloody brilliant story twists have totally killed me ded. ♥

And! You used the tapestry things. XD

[eutychides]

I told you I was going to incorporate the new info into the chapter!

Thank you so much, Misty!

omgomg I was up ridiculously late last night reading more of Prillalar's fics and have even more TezuRyo ideas now....:D

[gouache]

AHH. I didn't know about Abraxas, and I thought Viola had an eating disorder.. but 14?!?! Eee that is really young but hooray! I like how you added the latest thing about the bloodlines ;) hehe <3 awesome chapter. ONE MORE TO GO.

[eutychides]

I could never write an eating disorder, D. And thank you so much! :)

[firnsarnien]

Holy Hades! Draco almost died again! That man, what's it going to take to finally make him realize that Harry loves him and it's 'ok' for Harry to love him! More importantly, it's 'ok' for him to love Harry

[eutychides]

My poor characters could never have all roses and sunshine, firnsarnien! Thank you so much!

And as for an epilogue: no. No plans at all. Well, I do have one tiny idea for the verse, but, to be honest, absolutely no one but me and my beta would ever read it because it would squick 99% of any readers. ;)

[firnsarnien]

Squick huh? Now you've *really* got me interested. I can do squick, as long as the ending is happy, squick is good! LOL ;)

[hibernater]

Your story is addictive, in the very best way. There is nothing about Harry or Draco that is in any way unbelievable, for all that they've had four children together, and their daughter is pregnant with the child of a ghost no one has seen in twenty five years. I've been trying to puzzle out how you do it, make it so . . . inevitable, and I'm at a loss. Harry's reactions to Draco are heartbreaking. ALL his reactions are priceless - so very, very Harry. And in some convoluted way, Harry and Draco complement each other, they will never "be finished" with each other after all. Where do you archive your other writing?

[eutychides]

Thank you so much, hibernator! Some of the issues you bring up will be fleshed out more in the last section, I can assure you of that.

And as for my other writing, I'll give links soon enough. :)