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[Oneshot] Electric Twist

Feb 06, 2011 04:22

Title: Electric Twist
Pairing(s): Ohmiya
Rating: R
Disclaimer: do not own these boys
Word count: 3000
Summary: Sometimes Nino feels like he doesn't really know Ohno at all.

( Nino tried to cover up how flustered he was by readjusting his shirt and making sure his pants were zipped up )

ohmiya, fic, arashi

Comments 38

saru_k February 7 2011, 01:38:56 UTC

Waaaa.... Omg!! i loved it!!, omg... just omfg... i love it! HOT

that place *speechless*... now i feel like going out next saturday night... haahhah, forget it ^///^

and the ending... lol

“Next time Oh-chan, a simple confession will suffice.”

thanx for sharing

eva_lee February 7 2011, 20:04:14 UTC

lol Nino might have thought Ohno went a bit overboard? it also makes me want to go dancing, I was listening to some pretty weird music (for my tastes anyway) while writing it and completely wanted to go out. Thank you for reading, I'm glad you liked it!

albinococonut23 February 7 2011, 04:50:43 UTC

Ohhhhh my god.
I'm sorry, I'm so incoherent right now.... but this was fantastic.
The whole setting, and Ohno with eyeliner, and Nino checking his zipper, and the strobe light effect while they were kissing. And when Ohno nodded, I just-jashkdjshalkds-exploded a little, or something.
It was awesome. I think I have to read this again. :D

eva_lee February 7 2011, 20:06:47 UTC

AH! Can I just fangirl at you for a minute and tell you how much I loved To Quit This Act? I usually never comment because I'm very shy but I love love loved that fic!

I'm glad you liked this, it makes me happy when people mention those little details, Thank you so much for reading!

albinococonut23 February 8 2011, 04:52:25 UTC

Oh wow, thank you!
Your writing style is really interesting, *fangirls back* I'm totally flattered that you liked my work too :P

eva_lee February 12 2011, 05:21:44 UTC

Thank you too! I totally love your work, I'm currently glued to your Sakuraiba

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eva_lee February 11 2011, 02:20:00 UTC

Wah!!! Thank you so much!! What an amazing compliment ♥

phrenk February 11 2011, 19:45:31 UTC

I thoroughly enjoyed this fic, with its descriptiveness, setting, tension, and point of view. It was sexy and fun and sweet, too. Thank you for sharing! ♥

eva_lee February 12 2011, 05:25:52 UTC

Thank you for reading! I'm glad that the sweetness and the fluff came across as well

araanaz9 February 11 2011, 21:03:07 UTC

I liked this a lot. The tension was amazingly threaded through it all. It was sexy, but I think it was the emotions that really did it for me. I'll be keeping an eye on you from now on. ;)

eva_lee February 12 2011, 05:28:21 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! I'm flattered you liked it enough to watch out for me :)

I was really worried about writing something with such a high rating but I'm glad that the emotions behind it could also come across.