Deus Ex Machina - Chapter 20/?

[eva_lee]

Title: Deus Ex Machina - The Instruments of Fate
Chapter: 20/?
Pairings: Ohmiya, OhnoxOC, NinoxOC, AibaxOC + other background pairings
Rating: PG - 13, rating will go up
Disclaimer: I do not own Arashi
Beta: r_tenou
Previous Chapters:
Chapter 1 | Chapter 2 | Chapter 3 | Chapter 4 | Chapter 5 | Chapter 6 | Chapter 7 | Chapter 8 | Chapter 9 | Chapter 10 |

Comments

[jamasunda]

omfg, knew I had forgotten to comment. (I read this before bedtime on my iPod and resolved to comment when I woke up) T_T I'm so sorry m(_ _)m

BUT OMG, THE PLOT TWIST AT THE END HAD ME ALL ":O!!!!" I approve *thumbs up*! ... I'm so going to re-read this story, omg. Cannot wait for next chapter <3

[eva_lee]

WAH!! i'm so glad I have you as a reader, the comments you leave make me wildly happy! Glad you approve! i didn't know how that twist was going to go over XD XD

[mintceres]

I read that story in one go, because it was recommended to me.

You. are. a. genius.

This is the best-best-bestest fiction in arashi fandom /ficdom I have ever read (or at least very close to other brilliant stories).

Please, continue, it's just so awesome to read.

you won't mind if I add you to my fllist?

[eva_lee]

Someone rec'd it to you? You must be friends with my beta lol ^_^

First, like anyone who dares take on this monster of a fic, Thank you so much for reading it all the way through and not abandoning it through the middle, I think maybe 5 people in the whole world have read it from start to finish so every time I get a new reader it's like christmas. OC's are incredibly unpopular so for you to have actually liked it, well it makes me tear up a bit lol. Thank you so much, I hope you bear with me while I try to finish this.

Can I add you to my flist too?

[mintceres]

kokkaii recommended it to me in a discussion about good and bad oc's as an example of how well ocs can be done!
(and I'm not in the least disappointed!)

I saw that fic also at freestyle but was not interested becaues of the title (yes I know you shouldn't judge a book by its cover but yeah XD)

I started it and was first like 'huh' and wondered what the heck was going on and before I could even think of abandoning it I was on chapter 15.

Personally, I prefer reading ocs over the ever same arashi fu**s arashi porn / romance fics. Problem is that only few ocs are well done. most are shameless self-insert / mary sues which is really painful to read. And dont get me started on people inserting their friends (rl or internetfriends) in their arashi finds a girl - love at first sight - drama - sex and peace-fictions.

A fic like yours is a real gem <3

will add you back :)

[eva_lee]

I'm so happy you think so. I've seen this fandom be pretty cutting to a lot of OC fics, and so I definitely haven't advertised this one around. A lot of people won't even read them.

As for the title, it's lame I know -____- titles are not my strong suit lol.

[bluemonstar]

W.O.W O_O

I totally neglected my exam revision and finished this in one shot! It's gonna be hard to explain my love for your writing style and the story plot,
THE FREAKING AWESOME STORYLINE... so let me just give you a BIG virtual hug and a basket of cookies. :)

*huggles*

...still in awe....

ps: the twist at the end was amazing too...now I will have sleepless nights till the next chapter! XD

[eva_lee]

*HUGS* Thank you so much for reading!!! Even putting off your exam review, I can't believe it! I'm really glad you enjoyed it - I was very nervous about posting it to the comms.

I'm currently working on the next chapter, I hope to have it finished soon

[bluemonstar]

Don't be worried about your works! It's REALLY good. :) Though I had to admit that I wasn't as interested when I first read about the pairings, but I am so glad that I have decided to give this fic a try. Now I am so hooked onto it and have already re-read the story a couple of times~

Wheee~ Looking forward to the next chapter! XD

[aliehumdee]

Okay, I spent the last two hours plus reading chapter after chapter, and I'm thinking "where is the next one??!?" I love the way the story unraveled itself. It's becoming one of my favourite fics! And I am going to echo previous comments, there is not enough amount of oc arashi fics out there..so please do keep on writing the way you do, cause you are simply brilliant in writing sachi n Aubrey and not forgetting arashi characters really well. Can't wait for the next one!

[eva_lee]

Thank you so much for reading! Sorry it stops abruptly on that cliffhanger~

I'm glad you enjoyed the story, (I'm all frazzled because you said it was becoming your favourite. Tension up ^) I hope you will watch out for the next chapter