Fic: Lie a Little (Gambit/X-23) - Mature - Part 4

[eva_roisin]

Title: Lie a Little
Characters: Remy LeBeau, Laura Kinney, Julian Keller, Logan, Rogue
Pairing: Remy/Laura
Rating: Mature
Author's Notes/Warnings: Underage
Summary: When Remy goes to visit Laura, he makes a mistake that threatens to transform the nature of their friendship.

Comments

[etrangere]

your character work is terrific, all the little bits of setting establishing (like the Avengers / X-Men rivalry with Clint, oh boy) are awesome, and the writing is beautiful. The pairing feels so very, very wrong, and it's written believably in all its terrible wrongness. And leaves me feeling off kilter. Great work.

[eva_roisin]

Thank you so much! I have to admit that the wrongness of the pairing had me a little nervous, heh. It was a hard thing to handle. Thank you!

[anonymous]

Oh Eva (sob) it's the worst thing he could have done and you wrote it so good.

[eva_roisin]

Thanks! :)

[silentempathyx]

Oh dear god. I love Laura and Remy so much, it's ridiculous. Thank you for writing something so beautiful.
It feels so wrong, but in a weird way, I feel like they are perfect for each other. I just... Ugh. Thank you.

[eva_roisin]

Thank you! I agree that they're both perfect and wrong for each other--it took writing all that to see it. Thanks for commenting! :)

[belledewinter]

I have just found this and I think it's lovely. Thank you for writing it. <3