Haiku also posted at sg575:

Jul 19, 2004 12:08

Future angst haiku
from poor O'Neill's point of view
re: ep 2010.

Nostalgia

Somewhere a clock ticks--
lonely metronome of sound
reeling in the years.

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lisayaeger July 19 2004, 15:50:20 UTC
Yes, yes!! Keep them coming :-)

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evangeline1138 July 19 2004, 16:29:42 UTC
Yeahsureyabetcha! *g*

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heidiweidel July 19 2004, 15:52:13 UTC
Ooh, I like it. I have a metronome. Tick, tick...now! I like the multiple meanings of "reeling" that can be used here.

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evangeline1138 July 19 2004, 16:26:50 UTC
Thanks, Heids. I knew you would appreciate the double meaning. We can also imagine a different cabin scene with S/J and make it into one of those double entendres that I know you love. *hums "Going Fishin'*

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angst_angel July 27 2004, 12:57:24 UTC
I love the double meaning - and whoooooo, angst! *bounce* :D

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evangeline1138 July 28 2004, 00:29:48 UTC
Heehee--I squee for angst! Hmm...maybe we should make a club and have that as our motto. No, definitely not angsty enough. I angst for angst? *g*

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angst_angel July 28 2004, 21:04:57 UTC
*snerk* "I angst for angst" - has a ring to it. :D

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