The Forgotten: Chapter 8

Oct 07, 2012 17:26

“He is still alive?” Richard asks in shock.

“I do not think he has been alive all these years, but he is alive now. No one had seen these Forgotten until recently. Someone released them,” Shota tells us.

“Who would have released them?” I ask her.

“I am sure you all have plenty of enemies…” Shota shrugs.

“Darken Rahl?” Kahlan looks at Richard.

“Doubtful ( Read more... )

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laurilee59 October 8 2012, 16:21:54 UTC
Hi,” Kahlan grabs my attention and rides next to me.

“Something wrong?” I ask.

“No, just wanted to see how you were doing,” she smiles at me.

“I am fine,” I tell her quickly. Really, Kahlan? Do I look like I need to be mothered?

“Just wanted to make sure. You went through a lot yesterday,” Kahlan reminds me. Because I forgot and all.(This is so Kahlan and Cara.) You have both of them down so well.

This story is taking on some rather dark tones. I love it, it's insightful and intriguing at the same time. Why would the Forgotten think Cara has the answers they need? They must be connected to Darken Rahl in some fashion. Great job as always leaving us asking all these questions. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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evelyngrace87 October 8 2012, 16:53:57 UTC
You're too nice, sister! Thanks! :)

I am glad I am leaving you with questions... that is what I want! *muahaha*

I am loving writing Cara's POV! She is just so fantastic!

*HUG* for always reading!

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jlyncss October 8 2012, 21:08:53 UTC
“You are the only Mord’Sith to ever have broken free from Darken Rahl’s hold on you. Something about that makes them want you,” she tells us.
“That does not make any sense, witch. I did it of my own free will,” I snap.
“Well, yes, but usually your free will is destroyed during Mord’Sith training,” she replies. That much is true. They torture any sense of your being right from you.
“Something about being her broken from Darken Rahl’s grasp is making them come after Cara?” Zedd furrows his brow and directs his attention towards Shota.
“Apparently,” Shota shrugs, indifferent.
“They must think you have some sort of magic,” Zedd thinks aloud.
“Mord’Sith do not have magic,” I remind him.
“True. But they think you do. Perhaps…” Zedd starts pacing. A pacing Zedd is never a good sign.

Very intriguing bb!

And poor Cara seeing her sister that way… :(

“I am fine,” I tell her quickly. Really, Kahlan? Do I look like I need to be mothered ( ... )

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evelyngrace87 October 8 2012, 22:46:17 UTC
Quoting! YAY! :D

Thanks so much, sister! I am so glad you like it! And I love that you see what I did with the heroes line. That is what I wanted to get out there- our four heroes! <3

*HUGS* Thanks for always reading!!

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lotslovercss October 9 2012, 01:36:11 UTC
AGH!!!! YOU LEFT US HANGING THERE?!?!

You can't let my Richard be hurt or captured!!

LOVED THIS:
“You are the only Mord’Sith to ever have broken free from Darken Rahl’s hold on you. Something about that makes them want you,” she tells us.

That's an awesome idea!! LOVE how you're developing the plot. You are doing an amazing job with this, bb!

Can't wait for more! *HUGS*

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evelyngrace87 October 9 2012, 13:34:10 UTC
Aw, thanks for the kind words, sister! I am glad you like it!

Sorry...Richard may be in some trouble!! EEP! Poor Richee!

Thanks for always reading!!!

*HUGS*

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