The Forgotten: Chapter 14

Aug 06, 2013 21:07

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I am not sure whether my boots are thumping loudly on the freshly polished palace floor, or it is my heart that is thumping loudly. Roland and I agreed to start on the west side of the palace, which contained Darken Rahl’s more private libraries. We failed to discuss what we would do if we were caught. I am blindly hoping everyone is too ( Read more... )

the forgotten, cara

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laurilee59 August 7 2013, 18:09:20 UTC
Oh Cara sooooooo likes him!!!!

“Thank you, Cara,” Roland smiles at me. A smile that makes me smile in return. I quickly turn around, hoping he did not see the smile, knowing that he did. What was wrong with me? Focus, Cara, focus."

They are just so damn cute together. I love how you gave insight into how they are both feeling about being back in the palace. I think it would be difficult to go back into a whole that caused you nothing but pain and sorrow especially since you had no clue that it was pain and sorrow while you had been there..

Great update bb!!

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evelyngrace87 August 7 2013, 19:25:37 UTC
I know!! She does!!! ;) Well we know she does! Not sure if she knows she does!

Thanks for he compliment, bb! I know if I was Cara I would have a flood of memories!

And thanks for reading!!

XOXOXO

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lotslovercss August 9 2013, 00:57:08 UTC
ACCCKKK!!! What a mean place to stop!!

Great update, bb! You have me on the edge of my seat with this fic. I can't wait to find out what happens next!

THIS WAS AWESOME!
“Thank you, Cara,” Roland smiles at me. A smile that makes me smile in return. I quickly turn around, hoping he did not see the smile, knowing that he did. What was wrong with me? Focus, Cara, focus. I am thankful this library is small and we will be done soon, because being this close to him was getting harder.

Cara's starting to cave!! Can't wait for next update! :)

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evelyngrace87 August 21 2013, 15:44:34 UTC
Hee hee!!! I have to keep you wanting more! ;) Just whose voice does she hear?!

Thanks so much for reading!!

XOXOXO

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