sobriety writing

[evenauniverse]

yay/nay?

cutting ceilings through    and   trying and
finding another doubt at    knowing   -  rather,
 beleiving   there's no one above the roof   to answer
 the questions   with bent arms over beds.         grip
 harder and scream your prayers       at nothing but
 shingles and singles of men who have it better.    with
 the guys      who built

Comments

[a_pregnant_nun]

at first i thought i liked the first one better than the second, but now i'm not sure.

you are fantastic
at putting thoughts into words
a haiku for you

seriously, joe. they're wonderful.

dang

[evenauniverse]

that haiku was sick. your support rocks, rock, <3

[sciencebledsun]

dito.

those were amazing, both of them.

" grip
harder and scream your prayers at nothing but
shingles and singles of men who have it better." i love love love love love this line.

thank you for writing those. seriously

[tidalrabbit]

you have a beautiful mind. I really like the first one