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[evenauniverse]

      /smells like responsibility

it's the shorelines   where the water
 generally   cradles   its'  new like dancers for the rain
really just watch the news,    and it's still affecting the
golfers.    deeper cutting wounds
starting life    over as   the overjoyed   lay
their grateful blessings,     but the waves tonight don't
   appreciate the

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[a_pregnant_nun]

i don't know much about poetry or have a way with words, but i know what i like, and i like this.