fic: collection

[evennow_still]

Collection
585w; pg-13
Aoi/Uruha
For the prompt 2 different tears.

Comments

[evennow_still]

Shaking and crying, what is this? ;w;

First, omg sorry lol, I was kind of out of it as I was writing so I didn't realise it came out so intense. Also, its awesome that you noticed this, I also thinks he blames himself, like if he'd been more caring/funnier/prettier/whatever-er maybe it wouldn't have happened.

I'm glad the charactersations worked for you ;; I was scared they should be switched, but I didn't want to turn uru into a cheating bastard >:(. If I had continued it he pobably wouldn't give in to aoi again (I think its that way case I wrote the middle first, then the beginning, the the end. So I was more forgiving a that point lol.

and lol /o\ this is what happens when Uru is your bias but aoiki is your waylt otp.

Thank you for such a string of wonderful comments, I am not worthy ): ♥

[colberry]

This was so achingly gorgeous.

"You can't have them if I'm here."
Oh ♥ And you know, I can imagine Aoi saying that, being the romantic dork he is, and I just love how it's so simple. A simple solution in which Uruha doesn't have to run circles throughout Tokyo - he just has to lie in Aoi's warm arms. I adore that line.

How could he take that whispered "I love you" as a promise that it wouldn't hurt?
;A; Your writing is just so poignant. The way you say everything, even reveal everything in just a few words, a few subtle mentions ("her heels" and just the brief and broken "ru -- ki") is absolutely amazing. I love fics that can accomplish that and it's a really paramount sign of a wonderful writer

[evennow_still]

Ok so firstly, I am so so sorry for taking so long to reply to this amazing comment ;~; I've seen it and read it and read it again but then just stuck it to the back of my mind until I actually logged on to write again.

Secondly, thank you so much! Again for the lovely comment, and also for the recommendation!! I was seriously flattered you have no idea. ♥♥♥

[shadow_fictions]

kjdsklasdg.
This is gorgeous. I don't know what to say other than that...

[evennow_still]

I am so late but thank you! :) ♥

[cateris]

:))))) How could I not feel familiar and already in love to a fic that starts with Wonder Girls lyrics? <3

Dear, this was so beautiful. Even from the previous fic I read from you I wanted to mention how it's been such a long time since I'd read something so familiar to me but coming from different fandoms, something that j-rock barely has it, but you do through your writing style.

There's definitely a strong fingerprint of passion mixed with observant sensitivity to your writing style. Your characters are heartfelt through the way they feel a lot, their bonds spiritual and taking deeper links. They are characters that think and feel with their hearts and the way you make them connect with one another is absolutely incredible

Aoi likes touching him, kissing him, petting him, giving him so much affection that Uruha wonders if he's allowed to drown in it.You don't bump into characters like these too often in this fandom. Your English and vocabulary is GORGEOUS

[evennow_still]

Forgive my lateness in replying ;~;

Thank you from the bottom of my heart for all of your wonderful comments, its really flattering that you read everything /o\

Um :( I'm bad with words (go figure) so all I can say is thank you! Again! ♥♥♥