fic: (third time's) the charm

[evennow_still]

(Third Time's) The Charm
549w; pg
Onew/Minho; Jonghyun/Taemin
an aside/sequel to Occipital Bounce

Comments

[engraved_16]

hahaha
it was hilarious as soon as i read that first line with that guy from the bathroom. i forgot to mention that in my other comment, where they trick minho into starting to fight that other guy lmao omg im laughing right now just thinking about it.

this was so amusing and sweet :3
you really make their dynamic so appealing, especially since i've never considered this pairing.

loved this <333

[evennow_still]

that was my favorite part to write lol.

;~; ♥ thank you so much for reading

[imvus]

I'm so glad you wrote more of this world (It's such a nice one I could live here I think...lol)

And I love how cute these couples are. And Onew drinking Minho under the table is too funny (Minho better pretend he's drinking instead) I can still see Minho sitting on Onew's lap showing off his guns...lol. And the AI houses...there are the best!

and Minho needs Onew to see that was the point of the horror movies...scared and cuddled up. ;)

[evennow_still]

So I see I'm going to be spamming you with replies lol sorry. To be honest, even though I was kind of burnt out from sbb i couldnt let them go without revisting that scene, it was one of my faves! Much thanks, always ;~; ♥

[imvus]

I personally think Onew's trying to get Minho drunk...so he can take advantage...even though he doesn' t have to...but also Minho is totally manly/adorkable when he is.