I loved this Fanfic soooo much. There will be more right! I'm getting all my friends to read it. I can BARELY say how much I loved this. It was just...perfect. It really captured everything, the way you handled the sex was great, it showed the whole physical part of the relationship which was shown with the Journey's End kiss, but it wasn't smutty.
I made a LiveJournal just to follow this. How do I do it/check for updates?
I love this! You've done such a beautiful job. I've read it about 3 times through and some parts I keep going back to. You did such a beautiful job with characterization and dialogue. This is such a delight. Are you going to write more stories? This is the best Rose/alt 10, that I've seen. I can see it so clearly in my head that it's like I watched it as an episode. Brilliant! Thanks for all of your hard work. More please.
Re: Feedback is love!ever_wasMarch 19 2010, 22:27:44 UTC
Wow, such high praise -- I'm touched. I see it as an episode, too, which is why I wrote it; this so needed to be on the screen, hey? (though it wasn't just me!)
Re: Feedback is love!saunMarch 20 2010, 04:59:54 UTC
Thank you! I'm trying not to gush here, but I have a few more things to say. One of my favorite things about your fic is how you kept his essential doctor-ness. Sometimes I read Who fics and eventually it feels like they could be about any random man and woman. With yours though the Doctor doesn't feel lobotomized, but rather like a dynamic being uncomfortable in his own (new) skin. It doesn't feel like Rose got the short end of the stick. She got a complicated, brilliant Dr, who just happens to be human. You somehow let him keep his charisma. Also - very clever way to get him a sonic screwdriver. I loved the writing style. It was like you were rushing, falling, always in constant motion. Breathless. Everything you wrote felt exactly right. Ok - I'm sorry! Should have wrote all this in my first post - but I did want to take time to say it now. You did such a great job - I'm so envious of your writing skills. Kudos and Congrats!
I stumbled over here from quite_right_too, and I wanted to let you know that I loved reading this series you've written. Excellent work! I love your use of mythology, and the doctor was especially in character. "Only the Doctor could leave her and stay with her forever in the same second" is so perfectly true. Also, I couldn't stop giggling when he used the wrong setting on the beach!
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I made a LiveJournal just to follow this. How do I do it/check for updates?
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I'm in the middle of another fic right now, one not so sweet. I call it my AU Ever/Was -- divine, terrible, incomprehensible
It's a little sad, and I've only written six chapters -- so much fic to write, so little time!
I'll drop you a line when I write the next bit.
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I'm trying not to gush here, but I have a few more things to say. One of my favorite things about your fic is how you kept his essential doctor-ness. Sometimes I read Who fics and eventually it feels like they could be about any random man and woman. With yours though the Doctor doesn't feel lobotomized, but rather like a dynamic being uncomfortable in his own (new) skin. It doesn't feel like Rose got the short end of the stick. She got a complicated, brilliant Dr, who just happens to be human. You somehow let him keep his charisma. Also - very clever way to get him a sonic screwdriver.
I loved the writing style. It was like you were rushing, falling, always in constant motion. Breathless. Everything you wrote felt exactly right.
Ok - I'm sorry! Should have wrote all this in my first post - but I did want to take time to say it now. You did such a great job - I'm so envious of your writing skills. Kudos and Congrats!
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"Only the Doctor could leave her and stay with her forever in the same second" is so perfectly true.
Also, I couldn't stop giggling when he used the wrong setting on the beach!
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Now I have to go check out all the other stuff you guys have written. :D
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