[ooc] Concrit for initial impressions?

[everest_punch]

W-whee, I've already hit 100 comments. (Without making my own post, even!)

I think this is enough for people to be able to tell how is my driving? If you've interacted with Takami and you've read Eyeshield 21, am I portraying him adequately? For people who have not read the manga, does he have a strong voice and/or does he come off as I described

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[mopsnbrooms]

I think you're doing MARVELOUSLY ♥♥♥!! And I'd ttly shower you with more praise and positive crit (none much to give because you rock), but I'm literally falling asleep at the comp. |D;;;

So, um. HI TAKAMI-SAN. 8DDD

btw, speaking of icons...

[haphazardace]

I'LL SAVE YOU FROM THE BADTOUCH FROM KATOU AND ANEZAKI, TAKAMI-SAN

No, seriously though, so far, I love you, ohman. If there were any problems, I'd say something, but so far, you're doing a good job!

[everest_punch]

Okay, let's see. I think a great deal of what I'm going to say we've talked about in PM and elsewhere? And I'm taking a raincheck on a bigger essay because I know it's going to get long. 8D;;

First off, Takami's easygoing attitude about being in camp is entirely because Shin and Sakuraba are here and healthy and they've also grown as people while they've been here (so camp can't be too bad). If S&S weren't in camp, Takami would still have eventually adjusted and made friends, but it would have taken some time and failed escape attempts. This way he can train, play games with super powered people (c-challenge! yeah we're all retarded here) and again, train and make changes/developments to the Ballista and his passing technique which still lacks a name, as needed

[naughtwitchis]

. . . so far as I can tell, you're A++? XD BUT I'M NOT FAMILIAR WITH THE CANON.