Reasonable Madness [Chap.8][NarutoxGaara][AU][yaoi]

[evergreengarden]

Story: (Chapter 8: Far Too Close for Comfort) ----->
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4117001/8/

Discussion: First off, this is late. This is late and I'm so sorry. I'm a failure at life just like the doctors predicted I would be. I am, however, free from school now, and so I can go to when I used to tell the truth ^^*

Hm. This chapter is insane to me.

Comments

[evergreengarden]

"Quality is appreciated over expedience..."

I could not agree with you more. Hilariously enough, I'm thinking of rewriting this chapter sometime (soon), because it's weird to me. Next chapter will make it make a little more sense (did THAT make sense >.>) but still. I'm too fickle for my own good.

[evergreengarden]

That is the best way to describe it. It's very light. For now, I've made some very minor changes, but I'm still not really satisfied, and the changes are not momentous/relevant enough by far to re-read it. It requires major reconstruction. I do think I'll do it sometime soon. Oh wells. Next chapter should be better since I'm "in the mode". I wasn't "in the mode" when I wrote the last chapter. My life is very spur-of-the-moment based, but it's usually at the wrong moment >.> Thanks very much for your honesty, nonetheless! It's very helpful and appreciated :D