Forty Four Sunsets

[everybody_lives]

Oh, little prince! Bit by bit I came to understand the secrets of your sad little life . . . For a long time you had found your only entertainment in the quiet pleasure of looking at the sunset. I learned that new detail on the morning of the fourth day, when you said to me

Comments

[handysparehand]

Oh I liked this very much, that itch she feels, the way she leaves her smile, this was so pretty to read and so sad, too.

♥

[pinkhairedauror]

So so so beautiful! Awesome work!

[rude_not_ginger]

YOU DID IT!!!

Love it! I love the stream-of-consiousness behind River's narrative, the way you can feel each of the sunsets, even though some of them are at the same time or hidden while they're locked up somewhere. The style conveys a sense of constant motion, until the end where they're stopped.

It's fantastic!

[kingcreevey]

This is excellent!

[ambitious_woman]

....and logged in with other journal. Thank you so much! I didn't write much this year, but I think I was most proud of this. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!