Hello, my friend. I am so excited to bother you about this. Constantly. I make a sound and it sounds like c-c-crossover. It is like a mating call. A platonic one. :P
Haha, Jeffrey the Plot Nom. Hopefully he never gains the ability to bite holes in your plot. (If he ate an author?)
So what's up with Vivian? sacrifice, no sacrifice?
Hello to you too, my friend... I like this platonic mating call, I think it should be fulfilled :) Oh Jeffrey, he's solved a few plot holes so far, so he's allowed a few chomps at the rest of the story-line. The problem with Vivian is that I don't actually know. I'm pretty sure she makes a deal with False that ends up going south and causing her to betray everyone else, but I'm not sure about where everything goes from there. Can she outsmart False when she realizes what she's done (unlikely)? Will False prove merciful (also unlikely)? Will everyone else save her despite what she did? Some combination of these? Or will she die trying to make things better? I really have to wait until I'm writing it and see what feel right.
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Haha, Jeffrey the Plot Nom. Hopefully he never gains the ability to bite holes in your plot. (If he ate an author?)
So what's up with Vivian? sacrifice, no sacrifice?
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Oh Jeffrey, he's solved a few plot holes so far, so he's allowed a few chomps at the rest of the story-line.
The problem with Vivian is that I don't actually know. I'm pretty sure she makes a deal with False that ends up going south and causing her to betray everyone else, but I'm not sure about where everything goes from there. Can she outsmart False when she realizes what she's done (unlikely)? Will False prove merciful (also unlikely)? Will everyone else save her despite what she did? Some combination of these? Or will she die trying to make things better? I really have to wait until I'm writing it and see what feel right.
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