Chapter 5 of We All Fall Down

[evidenceshows]

I worked hard last night to get through some writer's block and so I finally got chapter 5 of the WIP all set.

Comments

[deadlikemedaisy]

awwww dont cry sam, its only the beginning!!!

Jack seemed to freak, must be the fact he enjoyed it :P

[evidenceshows]

Jack is her undoing *G*

Hee yesss Jack enjoyed it too much. I'm trying to set up how the affair was in the works long before it actually began. of course neither knew how much they would care about each other.

[eolivet]

Ooh, I like how you got them to touch there!! And I can definitely see Jack not wanting to eat a Poptart. :) I like the rapport you're developing between the two of them, and how it goes against Sam's self-proclaimed "rules." Very excited to see where this goes next -- please update soon!!! :D

(And awww, "chipper" indeed. :) Well, y'know, until two minutes later. Then it'd be "guilty" ;)

[evidenceshows]

Thanks! Yess Jack breaks all of Sam's rules *G*

(Actually the mood icon picture for guilty is the scene right after the chipper picture! Great minds think a like ;))

[newlands]

Ahhhh I'm really enjoying this. I hope you're going to torture them both for a little longer. I like it that way ;)

I particularly like Sam's inner thoughts. "He felt it too" - Wheeeeee *G*

Looking forward to the next chapter :)

[evidenceshows]

LOL! Well they don't start an affair until months later so yes they will be tortured *G*

Thanks for reading!!