The writing block lifts

[evidenceshows]

Chapter 7 of We All Fall Down which can I egotistically say is my second favorite chapter after the first one. I'm pleased with how it came out and now we are at the meat and potatoes.

Comments

[deadlikemedaisy]

ahhh Jack, why couldn't you have called her earlier? Try her cell!!

What's going on? You love leaving us in suspense, don't ya?

[evidenceshows]

Jack should have tried her cell but the author didn't even think of that *G*

I had to throw in some cliffhangers I use to love way too much Nancy Drew and Hardy Boy books that ended chapters with "There was a small noise behind her and the next she knew the room went black."

[eolivet]

OMG I knew Josh was evil...he has pictures of YANKEES in his apartment!!! :p

Seriously great description, and such an intriguing place to leave it, dude -- I'm psyched for more!!! Pleeeease update soon!!! :D

[evidenceshows]

ROFL!!! He lives in New York so I had to be realistic and make him a Yankees fan although I would have loved him to have a painting of Ted Williams and a picture of Johnny Damon in his apartment.

Thanks!! This is a the part that I've been waiting to get to where everything "falls down" and things get complicated in a realistic light.

[cynically_opt79]

Ooh, I'm glad the writer's block has dissipated. Looking forward to more - especially after the cliff hanger. :)

[evidenceshows]

Thanks so much!!! :D

[babythunder]

Oooh. Keep going!!!! :D Why doesn't Jack want Sam talking to Josh??? :ponders:

[evidenceshows]

You'll see why *G* Thanks for reading!

[cabarethaze]

Ooh, I love this. :wants more:

[evidenceshows]

Thanks!! I'm hoping my writer's block continues to stay away so that I can get the next chapter out quick.