The Final Chapter

[evidenceshows]

Okay this is the last chapter of We All Fall Down. The WIP is now complete. When I started this I wanted to do a different story than I usually write so it began differently and now is ending differently. Usually i have everything tied up at the end with little bows but not this time. So you'll either like it or hate it *G* And be honest my

Comments

[eolivet]

Wow...dude, I really liked that ending, actually. :) It's like...Sam ending up with Jack the only way she knows how -- really effective. :D I've so enjoyed this story -- such a rollercoaster ride through Sam's dark side. I hope you write more stories like this -- you do this type of fic really well. Congrats for trying something new, for finishing this story and for it being so successful!!! Keeeeeep writing!!! :D

[evidenceshows]

Thank you!! It was realy hard thing for me to do (to write the ending). It took two weeks actually because I kept wanting to anwser all the questions the reader might have and it is my first ending that doesn't end on a true happy note. But the whole point of the sstory was for me to try something new. /rambling

So anyways thank you for reading and providing such wonderful feedback over the course of the 12 chapters. :)

[_agent_spade_]

So she's sure she isn't nuts? Kidding. Great ending. I really reallly enjoyed this FF. Any chance for another? Maybe the start of the affair? (I know there are a lot of those already... but your style is really neat. I like it)

Good job.

~S

[evidenceshows]

Thank you very much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it. If I have the time I might be able to write a Jack/Sam affair beginning story before the snow flies :)