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Jul 07, 2006 09:05

The next installment of the Firefly summer cliffhanger series ;)

Title: Bodies in Motion
Chapter: 4
Rating: PG

( If you will not respond to thy request I will have to shoot the young lady here. )

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xxx_whitestones July 12 2006, 05:54:09 UTC

Great job! I can't wait for next installment! I hope you not kill Inara, I love her much.

evidenceshows July 12 2006, 12:15:56 UTC

Thanks for reading! :)

That's a neat icon.

Inara may not die *G*

eolivet July 12 2006, 19:02:59 UTC

Your villains are so effectively creepy -- the dialogue flows nicely between him and Mal here. River is almost like a Greek chorus with the strangeness of her narration...it sets a really good mood here, dude. Keeep writing!!! :)

evidenceshows July 13 2006, 02:55:23 UTC

Thank you!