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[evidenceshows]

Title: In Due Course

Chapter: 4

Fandom: Without a Trace

Rating: R for swearing and um I wish I could really write porn

Comments

[eolivet]

Eeeeeee, you used my most favorite romantic literary device in the whole world (the fight!) I loved J&S' convo -- it was so raw and real!!! And I totally wasn't expecting that ending...but in a good way. ;) Sorry I haven't had a chance to review this till now, but I hope you update soon!!! :D

[evidenceshows]

Awww I'm glad you liked the use of the fight! :) Jack and Sam had spent too much time apart so why make them (and us) suffer anymore ;)

Dude don't worry about reviewing quickly, I'm just grateful that you review at all. :) Your comments always give me insight to whether the story is coming along like I want it to for the audience.