Update, geez

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Daniel and his crew were out in the pouring rain 20 minutes before the found a door, the lucky finder was Anthony, who did a victory dance that received a smack from James. Pam let the rain cease as Devin erased all her umbrella’s, Daniel memorizing the map on his computer screen that led to wear Dareli was. Before Dylan was about to enter the

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[sweetheart625]

whoooo...

james isn't in theatre 2..
he sucks lol.

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p.s....

sometimes you went from like saying dareli, like she was a separate person...to talking to the reader as if they were dareli. pick one or the other, gosh! haha

but me likey...and the plot thickens.

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because i'm writing four stories at once and I keep making that damned mistake! Just picture it as saying 'dareli' instaed of you or soemthing.