LAST UPDATE OF THE PENSION
Shannon let out her loudest, high-pitched scream yet again and blew the entire side of the room clear off, shattering it into tiny pieces that flew everywhere. The sleek-haired kidnapper flew backwards into the wall, buried under pieces of cement and his own confusion and shock of what just happened. Dareli would have gone flying into the wall,
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*tear* i don't want it to be over yet.
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can I have Daniel!?
PLEASE!? lol
I likey the twist...she killed her own brother. v/ interesting.
And I likey the way you set up the end, how it went from dareli to her friends from dareli to her friends so you felt like they were experiencing stuff at the same time...and not even knowing it.
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