[Fic] Return to Sender: 01- Reita/Ruki

[evilgeniuskoji]

Title: Return to Sender
Chapter: 1/1
Author: evilgeniuskoji
Beta: visualcomplex 
Pairing: Reita/Ruki
Prompt: Lasts: last love letter, 15memories
Genre: Angst, romance
Rating: PG
Warning: Character death
Summary: Three years of secreted letters, up in flames. Say goodbye properly and put aside your regrets; you won't live wholly otherwise.
Comments: God, I am so late on this challenge. I hope I'

Comments

[gaze_luv]

it's beautifully written.
it made me want to cry, but i can't cry! XD

i like it very much~ <3

[evilgeniuskoji]

Thank you.
Crying is good sometimes~. -shot-

[origami_setunai]

It's been a long while since a piece of your writing has made me feel bittersweetness or overall sadness. That being said, short and sweet though this was, it was very powerfully written, I think.

You did a good job getting the emotions across in very simple but potent ways, and it sticks with you and kinda makes you wanna go back and read it again.

It was lovely, dear. Truly. Makes you sigh a bit at the end. Everyone's got their things they should've said, I guess.

Well done. <3

[evilgeniuskoji]

It's been a long time since you read/said anything, so that's my comeback for the day. -shot-

Yayyy. Glad to hear.

The second, third, and fourth letters burned up much quicker. ~

[shii_tan]

Smearing graphite on paper, the characters flowed across the page, bold and strong. His penmanship had improved over the years, as well as the complexity of the kanji he used, to the point where he knew Reita would’ve given up in disgust and dig out a dictionary if he’d ever received it.

I used to think that your style would be too descriptive or 'solid' for this kind of stories but the last two I've read from you proved me wrong. Although your words created tangible images in my mind, there was a definite sense of lightness to them.

In the distance, the wind carried the ashes of his feelings to the sky.

Thank you for finishing this beautiful story.

Re: The second, third, and fourth letters burned up much quicker. ~

[evilgeniuskoji]

Haha, I tried for a more abstract feeling this time. I used to write like this all the time, but the descriptions as you said, hung them down.

Thank you for reading it.

[bi_bye]

ooh, i like a good bit of character death~. i really liked the note that it ended on, a strangely bittersweet touch.

i love the emphasis on the letters, even if it's the theme; it wasn't overbearing on it being the last one, or the first, that he pointed out that they showed his feelings overall.

i really liked this~ good late night reading

[evilgeniuskoji]

I like it too, but people rarely click if they see' character death', so. e.e

Thanks for reading~.

[novlomien]

Absolutely stunning... I really enjoyed this as sad as it was. Seriously, great job!

[evilgeniuskoji]

Thanks! That's good to hear.